 motnahp-724 2009-12-01 . chapter 24Yay, finally! :) |
 DannySamLover20 2009-11-28 . chapter 24that was awesome i can't wait 4 more chapters! |
 SuperHeroes Fanatic 2009-11-28 . chapter 24HAHA!! I knew Danny's 'maybe' moment was gonna be in GNO ever since I read Sam's 'maybe' moment in ch.9!! And you're right, guys are slow or in Danny's case, very slow. =) But at least he's realizing it! I really enjoyed this chapter, its short, but it is a very important and defining moment, if I may say so. It is the day that Danny almost admits he likes Sam for more than a friend, out loud. (Wow, as I type this I feel like a BIG DP geek, but I can't help it! I love this show too much! =D Lol.) I think that at this point in the series, he has began to figure out his feelings for Sam, but hasn't completely admitted it to himself and therefore, can't admit it to others either. He's just so afraid of having a crush on Sam, he doesn't let himself believe that it could happen. As frustrating as it can be to have Danny being completely clueless sometimes, decoding his thoughts and, well, just the way he thinks, is very interesting to me. One of the many reasons I love this fic, you explore the characters so well, its amazing! You are Super Special Awesome! xD btw, sorry I haven't reviewed on Tucker's POV for Turning Tables, I've been busy & lazy & the day it was uploaded, I had come back from a competition in Arizona (it was a rush, we stayed there for about a day & a half!) & when I read it it was like 11PM and I just crashed! I forgot all about it until I read this fic, but it will be done! =D |
 Jae B 2009-11-27 . chapter 24You've picked a great point in the series for Danny's "maybe" moment. Yes, guys are slow that way. ;)
-Jae- |
 wigonas 2009-11-25 . chapter 24Yeay~! We finally came here!! Veni, vidi, vici! This is the very moment I expected to see in Danny's . It's a glad thing that Danny had been unprepared for The Question. It might have given him something to think about without avoidance or dodging.
You always capture me with your marvelous interpretation of character's thought. I can already feel today is going to be a wonderful day! |
 Black January 2009-11-25 . chapter 24I'm glad you updated, but does this mean we don't get to see Danny's reaction to Sam in her evil plant outfit? :( Aw...
Ah, well...I liked the chapter. Update soon! |
 WizKid94 2009-11-25 . chapter 24Oh, I have been waiting for this chapter for some time now! And as usual, it was no disappointment!! It's good to see you updating, I really look forward to it. Review when you can, and have a happy turkey day tomorrow :)!
~Cathy |
 Invader Johnny 2009-11-25 . chapter 24Yup, we guys are slow when it comes to emtions... it's kinda a curse if ya think about it, heh.
Anyways... nice Danny's "maybe" was short but still straight to the point... I believe.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 Foresaken Beast 2009-11-17 . chapter 23Frankly, I'm quite impressed with this story. I've read a fair many first-person POV's on and most of them made me want to strangle the nearest person. Your's was far from that. You take time in putting in a fair amount of detail into what the character you are portraying sees, hears, smells, etc. Most simple type up, "She smells nice." and move on without explaining it at all leaving it to sound a tad bit creepy. Though you have Sam and Danny share many of their views in much of the same manner, you do make it so that it is quite believable as the actual show makes it where one of them would start to say something only to have the other finish the sentence in a slightly different way than the person who started it intended. I would enjoy to see more from this interesting story. |
 opiumsong 2009-10-30 . chapter 23Oh, my! This is so god, it should be a crime to make us wait this long. A crime I tell you punishable by confiscating all the chocolate and cookies.
Thank you,
OS |
 SuperHeroes Fanatic 2009-10-29 . chapter 23Finally! I can review! My internet wasn't working right last night and when I finished reading the chapters for like the 3rd time it was like past midnight, so, anyway, ANOTHER AMAZING COUPLE OF CHAPTERS! This may sound kinda weird but after I read the first two chapters of this fic last year, I knew for a fact that DCMH was going to be epic! And it was! =D
-The way Danny has a conflict in his mind, trying his best to figure out his feelings but struggling on the way, until he reaches the conclusion that maybe he does feel something for Sam & since Gregor/Elliot is gone, he thinks its ok to feel that way. I love the way he starts thinking about the kiss & he wants to be the one kissing Sam, it scares him, but doesn't stop him from wanting it. "How can you like someone you already love?" That line has so much meaning, it was my favorite from Danny's chapter.
-Now Sam. Sam, Sam, Sam...she wants to like someone else but can't. She feels bad for using Gregor/Elliot & gets angry at Danny for spying on them, but still misses him. A lot. She tries to enjoy herself & forget Danny but it seems impossible. When she thinks that Danny will never like her in a more-than-just-friends-way, like its the most impossible thing in the world & doesn't realize the change that Danny has gone through by the end of the chapter, its a bit frustrating, because she's the one being clueless. "Mr. I Don't Want You But No One Else Can You Either" That one was a good one! I liked it!
Anyway, like always, you have done another amazing job!! Can't wait for the Tuck POV companion! I bet it'll be just as great! ^_^ |
 WizKid94 2009-10-29 . chapter 23Oh, you don't know how happy this update made me. I'm glad you got time to update. I've been home from school for almost two weeks...I hate mono. Well anyway, I can't wait for the next update. :D
~Cathy |
 DannySamLover20 2009-10-29 . chapter 23you so should continue this! boo ya! |
 Completely Different 2009-10-29 . chapter 23Yay! Another update...
Great chapter(s), as always. You really have a knack at getting into the characters heads, and presenting their feelings. |
 Super-Berry 2009-10-28 . chapter 23I've been dying to see these two chapters, and here they are! To be honest with you, there not as great as I expected. Or maybe because I had really high hopes, or maybe people don't understand the same thing I got from this episode.
For one thing, it really pisses me off people get upset with Sam for being a hypocrite on the whole spying on Danny and Valerie thing. She's a teenager and we all make mistakes, no one's perfect. Besides everyone is a hypocrite from time to time. What makes Sam any different? Even if she has 'that issue' where she doesn't think she's wrong.
Then the whole falling in Gregor/Elliot I think she really was falling for him, but it was still really hard for her to move. I mean the girl shared some crazy things with Danny, that's hard to forget. I think this episode makes a really bad impression on her, and people take it to heart. Its the fans of the show that don't understand that her emotions are clouding her thinking. Which seems to happen a lot for these DP characters.
I also like to say I don't think Sam knows about the boys'(Danny and Tucker) plan to create space between the new couple. Which I like to say Sam never involved Tucker to help keep Valerie and Danny apart. So Danny and Sam spied on each other dates, and Sam was being Hypocritical about it. Even so, Sam never got Tucker to do her dirty work. She simply accepted defeat and is trying to find someone who can share the same feelings with. Sorry so off topic and me going into crazy mode.
Anyways I really felt the last two chapters were rushed and there wasn't enough dialogue from the show. I really think you should of added the effect that it hit home for Danny on the chat between himself and Gregor. I felt there could have been scenes you could of added that could have helped, well, at least in my opinion.
I do understand where your coming from and thoughts and feelings on between this episode. So I must say I apologize for going, uh... well going off on a tangent. I get easily heated with "FWD" and "DCMH" episodes. Especially with, Double Cross My Heart because people don't seem to understand it like I do, or I don't think they do. Really, really sorry! I feel like a jerk, ugh. I really didn't mean to sound like to chew off your head. I guess you could say the topic is touchy with me, haha. I can't wait for the next chapters from this piece. I really do enjoy reading this and don't think I don't because of this chapter. I'm curious are you adding Danny's maybe now too? |
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