GAH! YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT! :D

I love your attention to detail, and how real you make everything sound.
I swear I could smell fire and burning blood, and the forest, and river water! It was amazing!

UPDATE!

xoxo,
Utah

ohnos!
what happens next?
I really wanna nkow what happens with Ambros and Cain.
update soon please!

I'm intrigued! I want to know what the frell is going on, here. You've painted a world that we once knew, and I'm wondering what happened to the fall, why everyone is where they are...

I want to know more!

i don't usually go for OC's, etc., but this is a great story. You've really developed the characters well while staying true to the mood of Tin Man. keep it up! can't wait to read more :)