Absolutly HORRIBLE!?!?!

hey, i'm like really consufsed here... um the title had nothig to do with the story and neither story nor title belonged in this section...

Did you realize that you posted TWO stories which is clearly in a wrong category??

Clearly you are giving this community a bad name.

And thanks to you also, this archive has no story to be added to my community, dedicated to the most reviewed one-shot in .

And no, your stories don't count; do you know why?

BECAUSE YOU PUT AN INUYASHA STORY IN AN A.I. LOVE YOU ARCHIVE.

P.S: Oh, I have every right to post a same review in two stories.

Wanna know why?

BECAUSE IT IS THE SAME STORY, DAMMIT.

Whoever told you that you could write must have been intoxicated at the time.

Seriously, what was going through your head when you decided to post this? It’s dreadful.

Do you take some kind of sick, twisted pleasure in mangling the English language?

Please, delete this.

Would you like to explain to me what exactly was going through your head when you wrote this story? haha lol
but, everything was kind of hard to read, seeing as you let out punctuation here, there...well everywhere! haha but its alright i guess, i had fun laughing at myself when i got confused or lost.
I never heard of the show A.I love you, so i decided to click on your story. little did I know it was a trap! hahah lol continue to practice, your writing has potential! *gives you thumbs up* :P

Uh, Can you please move this to Naruto if you're gonna write something like this? It's in the wrong section. Now let's get this review on the road.
You typed everything in big bold letters and it was in one big paragragh. Put in breaks after every speech. It makes the story easier to read. Also, please use the proper formatting choice.
I'm mentioning this point again- Move it to the proper catagory. I'ts kinda clogging up the section.
Finally, please use proper grammer. If you want to gain more reviews, click on spell check to see the problems you have.

You had a cool idea, but you need to make it longer and work on it a little. Write more and keep practicing.

sorry about this... when you are reading this dont stop or something bad will happen! My name is summer i am 15 years old i have blonde hair,many scars no nose or ears..i am dead.if you dont copy this just like from the ring, on 5 more sites.. or..i will appear one dark quiet night when your not expecting it by your bed with a knife and kill you. this is no joke something good will happen to you if you post this on 5 more pages

go00o0d

Where to begin...

1) Why did you format this in bold type AND italics? Neither are appropriate or appreciated. Either choice causes eyebleed. Both together is tortuous. You ought to fix this.

2) What on earth IS this--a Naruto fic or an Inuyasha fic? Either way, it certainly doesn't belong in A.I. Love You. I suggest you move it to the appropriate section.

3) The English syntax, grammar, punctuation, spelling, and capitalization in your fic are deplorable. PLease clean this up, or get yourself a good beta.

4) After reading this, I realized there was a Chapter 2 tucked in here. It's not immediately evident, and the story really doesn't need a Chapter 2, as Chapter 1 was so short.

5) Text blocks are poor format choices. There should be paragraph breaks after every single line of speech. That also should be fixed.

I don't flame. I give constructive criticism. I also report things that merit reporting.

Um, you know this iss for A.I. Love You not Naruto right...