Very nice story. I loved the "voices" in John's head XD

thank you for writing such an entertaining story!

I especially enjoyed (at least in this chapter) the “Nope. Just really bad at keeping track of my keys.” part


as well as

He nudged her shoulder with his own. “I’m just kidding you, Elizabeth. Me and the voices in my head are ready to follow you across the universe.”


thanks again

j j j

Wonderful, excellent story! I can't wipe the huge grin off my face that this story caused. It's perfect. The banter between the two of them is great, and the way their friendship was written was really believable. Love it!

fun ending :D Nice use of ancient tech.
I cracked up at “Their radio is better than ours,” LOLOLOL!

I absolutely loved reading this story, and I really liked the ending. Thanks for sharing!

Enjoyed this AU version of how that first episode could have gone. Liked the repartee between Elizabeth and John.

All together now, people: "Aaww."

That was great fun to read! Very imaginative! You write Sheppard and Weir so well!

And I just had to laugh when Sheppard called the robot R2!!

Ni ni ni nice!
I really hope there's more, but what I got is nice enough.

Absolutely wonderful! I love how John and Elizabeth interacted. Loved the way you showcased John's intelligence and Elizabeth's strength as well. Also how you subtly threw in bits of John's ATA gene activating things along the way that Elizabeth didn't pick up on. Masterfully done.

Great Job!

Karen

That was incredibly cute! I love his line about being ready to follow her across the universe ;) You write their banter so well! I just wish I could see it actually acted out rather than merely in my head. You are such a wonderful writer. It's easy to imagine what's going on!

This is lovely, really want to see Rodney's reaction. Will there be a sequel?

Great chapter! I love the back and forth between the two of them, it's very entertaining and very well done. I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest!

hope you write more. love the story.

I love the story, and the banter. The fact that the two of them don't seem to be falling in love is just a great bonus.