Awesome!
I really like your style, creativity and wording. You definitely got the characterisations right too. Although Madam Hooch is a bit of an enigma so you basically built a new character.

What I'd really like to see now, after reading other One-Shots you posted, is a novel from you. I bet you can come up with something original. Probably a comedy featuring Albus, since you like him so much, in his years at Hogwarts.

I can almost see the banners! "Albus Dumbledore: What you always wanted to know and no one was willing to tell you about! Follow Albus as he attends Hogwarts. What is he hiding behind the studious face he shows his peers and professors? Is it really true that every forty years a group of pranksters take over the school?"

Sleep on it !

IdSayWhyNot

So funny and so cute. Loved it.

*snicker* It must be a relief not to be reminded of his battles.
Albus was lucky enough to meet people who didn't care about Grindewald. What a lucky sod

Wait, was he serious? Or was that a joke? Did he actually ask her to marry him?

Lol, loved it, even though I didn't really process the science stuff. It's my worst subject...

That was a fun one. Good laughs at the end.

I love all the allusions in this piece - Madam Hooch, Minerva's love for Transfiguration, and the parallels between Dumbledore and Harry 'You were the youngest seeker at Hogwarts in a hundred and fifty years!' and the way you charecterized Minerva ... it was brilliant. As this oneshot is brilliant ... but then, all of your oneshots are. :)

this was really good =)

Wow. Your Albus scarily reminds me of an older, more articulate Harry with an interest in Transfiguration instead of DADA. That was obviously on purpose - the wording, the situation and Albus's additude, but maybe that's presumptous of me? Anyway, I find this incredibly hilarious and geniusly well written, and now I am off to read more of your other fics, which I hope are equally as good. :)

Awesome!!

Love it!! Please, please, it has so much potential to become a series, and trust me i will read the story up! Atleast for me please!

P.S
I loved when Albus asked her to marry him, and she said yes, kidding around of course, or so we think? Anyways awesome touch! I can't ignor or resist my hunger to read YOUR story.

Cute story. (obviously, Minerva would have known who Dumbledore was right from the getgo, since she did go to Hogwarts, and so did Hooch, but it's still pretty neat).

Wow, this has been a very well written story I very much enjoyed.

I really loved the playful interaction between Minerva and Albus and the way they got along that easily. A very sweet way of letting them meet for the first time.

Now, I could repeat how much I'm impressed by this story for the next few minutes, but that would possibly be quite boring for you. Therefore, I'm now going to read your other stories. This one made me love your writing skills.

hello I really like this one could you up date it please

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I always love your stories, and this re-confirmed my belief that reading them will make me fall off my chair with laughter.

I like how you had them meet at the pitch, completely at random, and just begin speaking; the conversation was witty and intelligent. Also, the other 'characters' complete the picture, adding details to the micro world, even when absent. 2 Alsos: perfect snappy ending - it ends the piece and starts something wonderful.

Thanks! Looking forward to your next!

THIS IS BRILLIANT! Right, -calms down- as usual, I love the humor & Minerva's straightforward, brash responses to Albus' questions had me grinning like an idiot. (Lol, for the I hate you!)The whole setting was plausible and you've mixed scientifc theory with magic really well, though I'm not all into Physics ... oh, yeah and the ending is fantastic.

Great job and this is being faved.

Cheers,
Lee.

I LOVE THIS! I don't even think the caps are enough.

It is absolutely brilliant. I've often wondered how to get magical science into a story and you did it flawlessly!

Only complaint is: Is the character at the end Madame Hooch? I thought her first name was Rolanda in the books. But that's a very tiny fault.