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Reviews for: The Dork Sandwich: An iCarly Love Story - Page 1 of 6
Claudio
2009-12-06 . chapter 2
Hey, I read the first 3 chapters and I really liked it...Looks like a real mess...hehehe...I´m looking forward to see how you solve that...will be fun, for sure...Thank you!
norinina
2009-12-01 . chapter 4
I can totally see Germy as an otaku! Haha, I love it.
Fantastic chapter, though really the whole story has been fantastic, and I can't wait to keep reading.
o
2009-11-18 . chapter 8
please hurry and update please :) i really want them to kiss it would be just so cute and awesome!
o
2009-11-18 . chapter 8
please hurry and update please :) i really want them to kiss it would be just so cute and awesome!
o
2009-11-18 . chapter 8
please hurry and update please :) i really want them to kiss it would be just so cute and awesome!
Cassie!
2009-09-04 . chapter 8
This is like my most favoritest story ever! you're such a great author. :) This story was so sweet. I love the ending and really everything about it. You made it hilarious, dramatic, and romantic all at the same time. And you fit the characters realy well! GREAT JOB! xD!
sockstar
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
You Seddie fans are insane. Not content with 55+ pages of seddie, they have to try and browbeat an author of a triangle story into making it seddie as well? Seriously wtf.
Seddieisforever
2009-07-23 . chapter 8
woah, wingman, I think you misunderstabd what I am saying. I'm NOT sending hate mail at all! Falling Further I hope you know that I ADORE YOUR STORY!

Just to make that clear.

Love what you do! Didn't mean to offend any iCarly reviewers or especially the ingenius author...YOU ROCK SO HARD!
Wingman
2009-07-22 . chapter 8
Hey Seddieisforever, calm the heck down seriously. Geez, what does Carly's behavior on the actual show have to do with this story the author is writing. If the author doesn't do what you want, you going to bombard her with hate email, give me a f'n break.

Anonymous, the story's not over yet, let's see where the author takes this.

To Falling Further, I'm enjoying the story so far. Excellent job with this. I myself am a Creddie fan, but if ends in Seddie that's ok, I won't freak out like a super obsessed over the top dramatic Seddie fan, its just fanfiction for goodnees sakes. I hate how some way too obsessed Seddie fans are so F'd up if there's a Creddie story or Creddie stuff happening. Continue with this awesome story.
Seddieisforever
2009-07-21 . chapter 8
please! I seriously DO NOT understand creddie. Oh, the meer word makes me cringe.

SEDDIE! PLEASE!

Don't let your ingenius stot get completely destroyed by creddie reviewwers. PLEASE! I have been a faithful follower in this story and...I love what u do. But PLEASE...SEDDIE!

Make them finally together...to be honest carly irritates me at her selfishness on the show and Sam is always second best...if not that. Please...make Rosaline, Carly and Sam the Juliet...you know Shakespeare..yes?

LOVE YOUR STORY!

What seddie101 said previously is spot on.
Anonymous
2009-07-19 . chapter 8
It's not right. if you choose Seddie i will %$&^*^%^%$%$^$*(&.

Ya trhose were random keys I pressed, it shoould scare you!!

Seriously though you don't torture seddie fans, with 7 chapters of mothered Creddie and then choose Seddie after all that time.

But The odds are against me. THis is aSeddie site and If you want to give in to the tempptatins of Seddie go ahead. I wont' (Can't) stop you.

Creddie fan, don't slit my throat. I just don't like that Freddie and Sam are together.
MindOverMatter
2009-07-12 . chapter 8
Do...do you know how happy I am that you updated? And that you decided to go to Seddie? (The answer: very.)

Again, very well written and I think you toned down on some of the urple prose. It was much more readable and less-inflated and concentrated on the main feelings at hand, which again you wrote flawlessly. How are you so good at writing what characters feel that they are totally realistic and dimensional? Ah, you don't have to answer that. That's probably an author's secret ;)

The only thing I could say you could improve on this chapter is that it feels like you neutered Sam a little too much. She is much too afraid and while I get that she feels a sense of relief, I find it really hard to believe that she would feel that comfortable being that naked in front of Freddie that fast. I guess I expected a little more...anger from Freddie? I don't know, it just seemed like a potential bang kind of only sizzled. Like him asking her out. Freddie asking Sam out. Like that should be a WHOA! moment, but instead Sam reacts like this: "Her blush magnified due to the dual threat of him looking in her eyes and asking her out to eat. What gave him the right to make her feel like this?" It's a little hard to believe that a girl who was so adamant that they never reveal that they kissed each other would blush (in fact, I think Sam would hate people like the Sam you described).

But you know, that's just a small little part. I loved Sam's mom and I loved how Sam went all ninja on their conversation and how she ripped the photo album from their clutches (and I liked how you didn't make Sam's mom totally negligent-bordering-on-child-abuse like some other stories).

"Maybe I will, Mom." <--PERFECT. Can't wait for your next chapter and can't wait to see what happens to Carly!
Seddie101
2009-07-11 . chapter 8
This is an amazing story.*sobs* sorry I get emotional, haha. If you want it to end beautifully and therefore create perfection...because this is where this story is heading...Seddie is definitely the way to go. Look at them both! They are meant for eachother! he CAN'T dump Pam!

He can't dump Engifanatic. His soulmate forever!

Insignificant "love" for carly...is just a dragging and continual and irritating infautuation... ok, carly happened to get a little caught up in it. She would get over it. It will just end up that the girl "who every guy would die to be with" goes with freddie...what meaning would that give off? It would be tragic!
Listen...how about the girl who everyone finds violent or the "misunderstood" one falls in love with Freddie Benson?

What do you say?

Ingenius story PLEASE update quickly !

& seriously, I REALLY CARE about this story so please consider my thoughts.

~Seddie101
sockstar
2009-07-06 . chapter 8
Really great story. I kinda feel this should go in a Creddie direction, Freddie still wants her, Carly is confused but trying to do what's best, whilst Sam hasn't really been upfront at all, really manipulative and outright mean, and in the end practically ruined Freddie's chance to get together with Carly. But there is still Seddie development to come rather than the one-sided view from Sam to Freddie that's happened so far.

Anyway, quality stuff. Looking forward to the next lot.
WatchMeShine13
2009-07-06 . chapter 8
This chapter was my FAVORITE so far! Please please please put the next one up NOW!
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