This...you...oh my god. I love you! Both Byakuran and Mukuro are so in character and your writing and everything- bleh, I can't even explain it! Amazing job though, this is definitely going on my favorites.

o/o

A+

so great. byakuran-sama ah

can you make a 10027 fic? you write so good with 10069.

zorba of Alanna-Twins: Indeed, this pairing needs more love. A lot more love, really.
And I think this was a really wonderful fic, seeing as it get's their personalities well, and that you get the reader into a sertain mood that fits the story perfectly^^ At least that's how I see it

This is so cute for some reason even though it suppose to be sad. I like this fic alot.Thank you for writing it.

^o^ This made me laugh at the end. Well written, good fic~!

You rule! the characters was to good to be true:D are it going to come out a second chapter or a new story with this paring? It's really few storys of mukuro and byakuran in the whole hand.Why aren´t there more of 10069?? keep up the good job, will watch after you´re future storys:)XD

I feel pretty dorky after that, because I drew some fanart of it. It was pretty inspiring haha. I hope you keep writing more 169, it's really good! Thank you for posting it! Here's the picture: http://sesshomaru-sara./art/KHR-An-Angel-Once-Asked-Me-104453368

Thank you so much for posting this!
The pairing's perfect and the story's absolutely- positively
beautiful!
I'm really lookng forward for your other work!! >

ah, I really love this twisted pairing and you wrote them just perfect *_*

That was.. perfect xDD Really the way you wrote those two just.. it was perfect. And beautiful. I love this pairing too much xD AND yes there definitely should be more of these two. Though.. for me they are quite hard to write. But I'm trying :D I hope you write more 10069 fics. I would be very happy if you do (hint hint) xD Bye~~