 GryphonWonder14 2009-05-04 . chapter 6Update! This is a great read, you're a wonderful writer! I'm hooked. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Afiong Bassey 2009-03-31 . chapter 6That's why you should watch who you talk on the internet. that's just creepy when is this person going to come out of hiding? |
 Ana Caterina 2009-03-31 . chapter 6I'm lovin' this. You have me hooked. |
 journey maker 2009-03-30 . chapter 6OMG!! I think I know who it is, is it Noah?? I'm hooked on this story.. Please update when you can.. |
 journey maker 2009-03-30 . chapter 5OMG!! Now whatever is going on has Seto accusing Mokie of messing with things. When the laptop almost shocked him, what in the world is going on?? I love reading this story.. Must read on. |
 journey maker 2009-03-30 . chapter 4OMG!! What's going on?? Question: Is the one doing all this Gozaburo,Pegasus or Dartz?? Must read on.. |
 journey maker 2009-03-30 . chapter 2Who in the world is doing this?? This story is getting really good. Must read on. |
 journey maker 2009-03-30 . chapter 1I wonder what's going on? Must read on. |
 Dreamcreator 2009-03-30 . chapter 6HI!
Love love your story by the way, its so full of suspence and all. Is that Seto or Noah talking to Mokuba?
Anyway have to ask will you update your other story, the one with Alister and Mokuba? Please its a very good story with an original plot.
Thank you and keep up the good work!
Dreamcreator |
 Afiong Bassey 2009-01-23 . chapter 5alright this is getting really freaky. Nao's stalking them when will he be revealed? |
 SereneShadows 2009-01-22 . chapter 5This chapter was awesome! I hope you have another one up soon! I'm really enjoying this story keep up the good work! ^.^ |
 Silver Tears 11 2009-01-16 . chapter 4Awesome plot and story. This definately has me intrigued. I hope you update soon because I'm really enjoying your work! |
 comet7 2008-12-26 . chapter 4And the plot thickens!
This is great. nice and suspenseful. I can't wait for the next chapter!
BTW; Thank you for updating so regularly! It brightens my life :D |
 Afiong Bassey 2008-12-19 . chapter 4seto must be going crazy right now! I'd be freaked too if someone was hacking on my computer and going in my personal files. |
 comet7 2008-12-09 . chapter 3This is getting suspenseful! Thank you for updating so regularly. It makes me happy :D
I only noticed one mistake. "Mokuba let out a light sigh of relief, to know that his brother was alright after that bazaar machine incident." I think you meant "Bizarre" Other then that, you did a good job with spelling and grammar.
Comet7 |