Yowsa! This was hot. Me likey. Jake is pretty intense, I could totally see this happening. But where? Where is this mysterious darkness? A girl needs a location for her fantasies...

Hot damn.

Awsome!

so hot and sweet=D

HOT (=

Wow, that was incredibly hot! The scene is absolutely sexy indeed, and the emotions within are very moving and romantic. Great job!

omg. can you say hot?

That was so hot. Was there an adjective associated with heat that you didn't use 'cause I'm sweltering. Sweltering!?! I don't think you used 'sweltering'. I gues I'll have to read it again just to make sure. LOL

damn. hot. without being really detailed. it leaves you to wonder. i loved it:)

this story was absolutely wonderful, erotic, creative... there aren't enough words to describe!

This story was seductive, sexy , well written.
I'm excited to continue reading more of your stories !

Even though you wrote this ages ago, I thought you may still be interested in reviews. I must say, VERY well done. Erotic, sexy and intensely creative. You use seductive wording and imagery rather than the cheap ** shots and vulgarity that most seem to thing grants them the right to call them selves "writer." I give this one two thumbs way up. A truly great show of talent for "Team Jacob."

omg!
that was awsome!
nice work !

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It has class, mature charm and the ability to evoke emotions in people that have previously remained locked within them.

My favorite line? "...his eyes fills with the kind of darkness that states; mine." I love how you portray the dormant wolf, noone ever does. But wolves are possesive and mate for life so this was very appropriate.

Congratulations and Kudos. Hooray for you.

--Jeanna

YAY JAKE!!

You are, no doubt, my favorite author. I'm sweating it waas so hot.

It was so poetic and intimate it was incredible! If I had half the writing skill as you, I'd be overly satisfied. Well done.