I was disturbed by how some of the names of the characters were mangled, and also the term 'Cue de Ta', which doesn't really say anything. The proper term is 'Coup d'État', which quite simply means 'Revolution'. Some other terms were mangled in this way, too. Annoying as hell when that part is read, but the story in itself was good enough to oversee the small flaws.

Cheers.

AWESOME

cool

Ranma grew up as a ninja so he knows how harsh the world can be and he's just going to let his mother figure go and get gangraped by a bunch ninja?

They want her bloodline right? And i just can't see Mist Nin being kind enough to impregnate her artificially to get a male child to donate sperm to a lot women.

One word... Democratic!
Have you actually read the manga or seen the anime.
The ninja are lead by the Hokage who either chooses his successor (a Military Dictatorship) or is chosen by the Village council (which is an oligarchy consisting of clan heads), he is in turn lead by the fire lord (Daimyo) whose position is hereditary (a monarchy).

Regarding Ranma's plans for Orochimaru's worthless hide: why settle for just a snakeskin wallet, when he could make a pair of boots for Anko out of Orochimaru?

Banishment? Ninja by far prefer killing, since that way they can't reveal secrets or plot for revenge. Plus, it would be far more likely that, if not killed outright, they would imprison and interrogate him before killing him. Never just letting them go. Ninja, unless given some kind of special treatment (like the Sannin, although even with their wondering they are still bound to the village and can be ordered to return) or are considered dead (but aren't) are always hunted down if they abandon the village and take off. Just what ranking the have and how they are placed in the bingo book depend on their skills and any special abilities they have.

A good story with an interesting turn of events. I do think though some the point have been researched well and others pretty poorly such as the clan restoration act I'm sersiously doubting they initiate on 14 yr old, a 16 yr old yeah but not an 14 year old if they did Sasuke would already have several wives.

I also don't think much of the Kekai genkai you thought up for Naruto or giving him a kekai genkai I don't mind the training but the kekai genkai is pushing it. Was the kekai genkai simply an excuse to pair up a few girls with Naruto (though I love the pairings).

I think its nice you gave Naruto his Mum but why Sasuke Mum as well she would been killed by Itachi so that it benefits him to fight Madara.

It'll be interesting to see what happens next.

Hmm, Jiraiya paraphrasing Yoda? That doesn't bode well for Naruto.

Please kill Orochimaru as painfully as possible.

Not a bad add-on. Well done.

it's still a good premise and an intersting plot. your execution still needs work as you're pretty much being lackluster in the fights and not that good in the understanding of the political portion. it keeps reminding me of the korean dramas where everyone bends over backwards for you if you're higher status than them rather than a japanese one where they show you one face and scheme behind your back.

*sigh*, I don't like the harem, but I guess I can understand it. At least you put it into a good logical way (better than most fics). Good job

Great chapter update soon.

Not bad, Not bad at all. It's kind of amusing to see you go far from canon one second, and then snap right back into another. Very good job