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smily123
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
sweet! :-) Could really picture this scene, great job!
aradiaeva
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
aww so cute...loved it
BlondieChemGirl
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Very cute - I love the scene. And Pink really isn't Ronon's color. Thanks for the smile it gave me. BlondieCG
renisanz
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
Aw. Cute imagery of Ronon with the girl baby. :) Thanks for writing this.
rhaddict
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
Soo cute! I thought the noises were something else until he 'shifting the bundle in his arms around.'- than I thought baby. Ahh, Ronon with a baby girl in his arms- what a beautiful image. I reread it after I figured out it was a baby making the noise and laughed. Very well done. Definitely makes the comment "I'm sorry, big guy, but you don't look very intimidating tonight." work so well. How can he look really mean cradling a baby in his arms. :) Beautiful.
Daelena
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
This story is so adorable. I really liked it. And I agree. If I were in control of the Stargate franchise, which I am not, unfortunately, there would not be the Keller/McKay pairing. Ronon and Jennifer seem so great together.
deal4321
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
I enjoyed and bet Ronon would make a great Dad!! Thanks for sharing. :-)
priscilla
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Aw! lol I loved it! I soo can't wait for you to post your r/k story and ew to lastnight's McKeller!
sb4ever
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Very cute! Ronon as a dad. I can see it.
olive-girl-92
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
i really liked this! so cute! and i agree with you about mckeller. such an annoying pairing. i hate them so much. ronan and jennifer are so much better!!
Dragongirl4741
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Love it and what a cute and (I alsays think) sexy image of Ronon carrying around a little baby girl :D
bailey1ak
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Very cute story, I could so picture Ronon as a father.
everlovin
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Wonderful, Kitten! Love it! I would love to see some Ronon/Jenn babies!
MellowYellow1234
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Sqee! That was so cute and I loved how the baby was a surprise.. I thought the sounds were from him and Jenn arguing..or you know :)
Nika Dixon
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
Loved that the GIRL wasn't really the girl everyone thinks it should be... :P Sneaky and a great one shot!
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