Awesomesauce, Ness got one of his friends back! I wasn't really expecting that, but it's refreshing to see that.

And I've been waiting for Lucas to do that for a whole while now. And I only expected its intended effect, and not that Ness would get hurt by it.

Ciao! Update soon!

Wow... TL is really deep.

I thought TL was gonna confess his love to Ness and they'd start making out and Lucas would walk in. THAT SHOULD HAPPEN NEXT CHAPTER!

"He knew if he so much as turned the other way, they’d catapult him back into Red, who’d happily open another can of whoopass on his... **."
Best. Quote. EVER.

Yes Toon Link is the awesome!

You have a way of making me; if not only me, dislike; no rather loathe, that itchy with a b pokemon trainer. So much that I'm practically avoiding every story with traces of Red in it--unless he's getting beaten. *Maniacally laughs*

Update soon! *Prays*

...ouch. Nothing can hurt worse than pride.

i new that would happen 2 chapters ago

Lmfao, that was great. XD

If memory serves — and it does — you told me how long you at least expected the story to be. With your also expected epilogue, doesn't that mean you're nearly done?

Don't worry that this is much much much much much much much much much much much much shorter (probably good to take a few 'much'es off of that) than my last review; I'm just clarifying so I know if I should bother to start writing my review soon or not.

Regards,

≈Roy

1. 5 stars :D
2. Does this mean the next chapter will come quicker?

o cliffie.


I love you for updating.

This is one of my most favorite fics.Please make more chapters.

I CAN'T STOP READING YOUR STORY!! I felt so bad for Ness after Red threatened to shoot Ness below the belt. But I can't beleive Ness has to go through all of that BS. Red is such a horny retard.

"The trials and tribulations will only get worse from here"? Is that POSSIBLE? Thanks for updating. Anyway, about halfway through Red threatening Ness, I thought Lucas was gonna come in and the baby would be paralyzed. But this works too! In a roleplay I did, Claus (Lucas's twin if you don't know) almost killed his true love, Shay the girl, humanized Pikachu, and thier unborn baby. Then everyone thought CLAUS died, and Shay nearly killed herself. And Lucas was preg as well, and the baby sometimes "posesses" him, and the baby hates Claus, so Lucas started kicking claus's dead body. Then he moved and Shay basically did a touchdown dance and... Anyhoo, my point was that you could've made that a LOT more dramatic, and I'm glad you didn't.
<3//: Random

I SO expected that! Well, not Ness' "retribution", but the part where his ** got saved. Either way, I'm still waiting for the day Lucas personally beats the Idiot brigade in the ground >_>.

Lol, anyway, ciao! Update soon!

Ness seriously needs to kick their asses.

Aww poor Ness. Anyways great chapter. :)