awww thats soooo sad ( tear

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I didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD

That was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...

This was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.

This is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. o)

It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!

Cheers,

Stef o)

Wonderful idea!

But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...

I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)

THX

God bless you!

Thara

Wow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!

ohh i like i like... good job ]

Beautiful. Short, sweet, and to the point.

10/10

This is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.

Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P

Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.

Wow...

Nice writing conventions you got there...

Love the contrast and simplicity of it! _ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...

Good story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.

I really liked this; the repetition works very nicely! Great job. _