|Reviews for They Wouldn't See|
| Future Forensic 12/26/11 . chapter 1
awww thats soooo sad ( tear
| TulipNixphe 5/23/11 . chapter 1
| Katheryn Mae 1/22/09 . chapter 1
I didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 1/15/09 . chapter 1
That was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...
| Ilse O'Hara 12/23/08 . chapter 1
This was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
| Stefdarlin 11/28/08 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. o)
It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!
| Missing Linka 11/26/08 . chapter 1
But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...
I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)
God bless you!
| OSUSprinks 11/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
| iluvcheer27 11/23/08 . chapter 1
ohh i like i like... good job ]
| Ogehsim 11/22/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Short, sweet, and to the point.
| Sophia Anya Lee 11/21/08 . chapter 1
This is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.
Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P
Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.
| anberry 11/21/08 . chapter 1
Nice writing conventions you got there...
Love the contrast and simplicity of it! _ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...
| mais.CAPITALS 11/21/08 . chapter 1
Good story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.
| BandGeek58407 11/21/08 . chapter 1
I really liked this; the repetition works very nicely! Great job. _