 narusaku 2009-01-28 . chapter 1 dude thats so good, keep going please i loved it |
 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-12-17 . chapter 1This was an awesome oneshot.
I like how you showed Sakura's progression of her love for Naruto, from friendship to full blown love.
I can only hope you make a sequel to this where you show what happens, especially after reading the recent manga chapters where Naruto is working on his new secret jutsu, and from the looks of it, it puts Sasuke's ultimate lightening technique and Amatersu to shame, hell even his four tailed Kyuubi blast looked like nothing compared to it.
Again, Nice job. |
 roxnroll 2008-11-25 . chapter 1I loved it. I'm feeling that they're growing so close in the manga-which I'm totally freaking out over. Wonderful job.
Rox |
 Kim 2008-11-24 . chapter 1 omg! that roked! |
 narusak 2008-11-23 . chapter 1 Well that was a pretty good fic. Is it a one-shot or do you plan to keep going cause i think it would be Awesome if not and it was just a oneshot good job really liked it |
 Great Job 2008-11-22 . chapter 1 I just loved it...no other words required. |
 Peach Tuesday's 2008-11-22 . chapter 1aw!
I love Naruto and Sakura [:
Great one shot! |
 poornmiserable 2008-11-21 . chapter 1 bittersweet i wonder if he will come back alive...maybe a continuation? just a thought... great work by the way keep 'em coming especially naru/saku not enough love for these two |
 Darkide 2008-11-21 . chapter 1That was good, not over done and not under done but just right.
The characters' emotions were conveyed very well, definitely drew me into the story, well done. And it didn't overly dramatic, emotions running wild and people screaming every little thing.
A very well written story that I really liked it. I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation but I understand if it doesn't lol. Anywho great job! |