itd be sick if u continued this with a story of the hiken!! it be amazing or instead of byakugan (sp?) hinata had the hiken and learned on her own and there could be soo much more with it!! itd be an amazing story!

ITS EFFIN GOOD! paragraphs were kinda hard to read though.

aw, so cute! And actually I may agree and say its a bit out of character but it was cute none the less and it really was a mixtre of ooc but thats to be expected considering how altering the past from the actual anime...

I'm usually not satisfied with endings, but I absolutely loved your epilogue! The wedding, the kids and the new bloodline <3

This Story started out so sweet and adorable, But Then this Sequel tossed it into an indulging story, i devoured it in one night.
I Hate You. Nah, Just Kidding, i love you for making such a good story !..
HEEART.

That was stunning and beautiful. I think Hinata's thoughts were perfectly realistic, I would have been unsure if I were in her situation. I loved the plot twist of the blind children who later developed a new bloodline limit, it was so original, creative, adn fitting. That was the most perfect ending. Once again, you are amazing.

nice story i like very much.and i know just what you mean bout the drawing part.

sasuke is not gay!other than that i like this story.allot!

So KAWAII!

aw i loved it~

i totally understand how you feel and well i say dont doubt yourself cause you are really one amazing writer.

wow. How awesome. Another job well done =)

Ah, love. It's just so lovely... slightly angsty, slightly dark, but everything just right.

And, as with the first installment, that bit about clans at the end of your fic... really ends the fic on a perfect note.

Great work!

LOVE IT! It was so cute ^_^ I still feel tingly

the epilogue is hauntingly beautiful. I love it! fav-ed. XD

hahah i just read this one after the prequel. Cool... :D write more.