|Reviews for Downtime|
| darkangelwitch 12/2/12 . chapter 1
Would spmebody please tell me what's the first story before this one is course I'm desperate
| CatBeist 12/16/08 . chapter 4
I am being slow today... it is 2.30 and I barely got my wash inn the washer and just ate breakfast... tchihi... But I HAVE to read this before you get home so you better not get back WAY to early :D
Oh like the start, poor Sammy... I really really DO wonder what will happen with his offspring. An idea though... as if the boys will listen to me. I mean there will be a day where Sam and Dean will face Lilith and there will be a moment where Sam has to make the choice of taking a life of an innocent baby or somehow take it once it is alive and try and raise it to be good... But... as Kitsume said, if many of those who are after Lilith KNEW she would be Head Hunted! So... why not spread the word? Not necessarily have Sam named but that she is carrying the devilspawn of the future...
Uhm... That was honestly not really nice of Dean to do...and WHY exactly can he tell whatever spirit to FORCE Sam to watch this? Did they become buddies while Dean were snacking on snacks?
“Let yourself see the possibility of light even if you cannot see the light itself.”
I don't know if you told me bout this line or not but it is a good line :)
I like Kitsune... weather she will stick around for a while or not, I really do think that she is what Sam needs right now. Someone who understand him and what he feels and someone he dares to talk to.
Alright I am done...Big chapter so I am sure to have missed loads of stuff but I am sure you will ask or tell me later anywho! Liked how you tied it up, and it wasn't too bad even for a "relaxing" hunt for the boys. I mean is it really a fic if they don't get whacked just a little bit? Feel bad for Dean being creped out knowing someone was coming for him, someone was right there ready to take him and how his thoughts go to Sam wondering if this was how it felt... at least partly cus as Dean said... He wasn't even being touched then.
And I had to cheat :P About what Nevermore caught... I couldn't help myself... though think she probably caught a LOT more than I did, cus I just read... lol but one was the footsteps, that if Dean heard footsteps he would have heard two sets? Though I do think the thing was the dazed eyes of the guy attacker...
I KNEW he was the one though... tchihi... wasn't that many characters to chose form, didn't know it would be the both of them though but oh well... :)
As said... again another great story, tons of pet pet to the creater of this story even for a short one a lot of things happened, and I am looking forward to you picking up the digital camera thing inn the next one... although... a good stalker would probably turn off all sound of their digi-cam :D
Tchihi just messing :D
Hope you had a good day
Let's order pizza :D
You pick I pay... :D
| CatBeist 12/11/08 . chapter 3
Hey over there sitting inn your chair grinning :) Hey you practically BEGGED for me to at least read something today since you got to spend most of the day actually working and maybe not earning anything :( I hope you do though... that would be a very very nice sum. ANYWHO... I have cleaned up, eaten and got the xmas tree lights on :) I am ready to read.
I swear she gets stabbed like Sammy gets choked and I get tossed into walls. *inn the voice of Peanut* "A LOT"
Hmm... never knew you could write a scene that awkward. I mean how Julie comes on to Dean, how he backs away, how it all feels just so wrong... feels... iffy... feels... just IFFY!
Hmm *frowns* I got to say this is very interesting... Very not the way you usually write a story so really weird to read though don't get me wrong. This is good, heck this is brilliant! Though not leaving us that many clues are you? Either that or I am just not getting things. So... well the boys room are supposed to be haunted so I guess that is all good and fine... why the heck does Dean not get out and wait for Sammy and Kitsune... and where are those two anyways... I MIGHT get to the last one soon... but head need a break... too much white background... hate ffn for that... :D
Still I really do love this story and I want to know what is going on and if I don't today then at the very very very least I will get to it very soon! :D YAY SPLEWE NO STOP DON'T SPIN!
| Nvrmore 12/10/08 . chapter 4
Interesting... how did Dean know Sam was there? Heard the footsteps? (though he didn't even check to make sure it was him... of course, there would have been two sets with Kitsune there. Think my imagination is getting the best of me. :) )
Ahh. I like that Kitsune has the same sense of protectiveness Laura does. :D
Oo. :( Dean! Forcing Sam to watch after such a recent... event of his own. tsk tsk.
You know... I would think it would take an incredible amount of strength to flip Dean onto his back.
:D Nicely done. I like how you tied it all up... though I'm not really sure if the digital camera was clicking off (because the ghosts could now rest) or back on because the perps (Julie and the bald guy) were actually possessed. I wonder about that because you mentioned the dead or dazed eyes for both of them...
Anyway, it still wasn't too bad of a case all things considered. :) And it's nice that they're both learning to relax. They don't have to go just to be going somewhere.
| Tacpebs 12/9/08 . chapter 4
Gah! Thought I told you I don't like that word. "end" T_T Awesome story! What's this about a camera clicking? I wasn't aware we could take pics! Who's takin' pics of my boys? Thanks for an awesome read!
| Tacpebs 12/9/08 . chapter 3
Whoa. That was intense. O.o On to the next chapter!
| TraSan 12/8/08 . chapter 4
My heart just broke for Sam when Dean set him down in front of that television. I know Dean wasn't thinking clearly, and Sam understood that too, but ouch!
And then when Dean's attacked along with Sam and Kitsune (whom I'm liking more and more all the time by the way. Loved her conversation with Sam about what had happened and his feelings) it ratcheted up the tension.
So glad the boys made it out relatively okay. But who exactly is snapping the pics and why?
Awesome little story, sifi.
| CatBeist 12/8/08 . chapter 2
Woho another chapter has been read :D
Hey I am not doing much today but I am getting things done even so. Shopping, cut out some for your shoulder thingy's and need to start laundry but I got caught up inn this chapter.
I like it... Honestly I like that even though this is a short one we do get to touch base with the boys and we do see that you do give them time to heal... at least a little bit. As always you got the boys interactions perfectly, and I know I said that last time too if I am not mistaken but then again you couldn't make it wrong. I mean you raised these boys for most of their time right? You got just as much rights to the boys and WHO they are as Krip does... At least I think you do :) They are your boys too!
I love how you have the boys kinda arguing too... Cus they don't really FIGHT that much but they kinda discuss out of desperation and then they explain themselves and it ends up being a little more okay. And Sammy does deserve someone too. Annd maybe Kitsune is one that is right for Sammy... I mean he isn't just a regular Joe. Just mean that both boys need someone who would understand them, that can inn ways protect them, and most important can understand what they are doing.
And LOL, HARD CANDY! Hey at least I can see Sam like those kind of movies more than Dean... But it wasn't THAT bad... I mean she didn't even actually TOUCH his balls... Yes it was a mindfuck with no boundries what so ever but at least inn the end the guy was an ass!
So... I was going to ask who it was who was taking their pictures all chapter long? Who is stalking them, but I am kinda figuring that it is the chick? Is she obsessing about my lad? Huh? huh? huh?
Alright I got to go and do laundry!
2 down 2 to go
| sunnyjunedays 12/8/08 . chapter 4
Great ending to this story. I am left wondering whether there will be more to come in another story after the ending to this. Whether there is or not i loved it. x
| deangirl1 12/8/08 . chapter 4
Cool ending to the story - I knew there was something up with that girl! But very creepy that digital cameral at the end... Thanks for this!
| SamDeanLover28 12/7/08 . chapter 4
“Good... just keep it up Casper Sammy’ll be here in no time.” LOL
| Nana56 12/7/08 . chapter 4
Oh that digital camera again! That's driving me crazy, girl!
Really awesome story, sweetie. I loved the mystery that went along with it and the hint of something deeper going on. Well done, my dear.
So much for a vacation, huh? *winks*
| Maz101 12/7/08 . chapter 4
Hmm so the stalker lives on - very intriguing. Nice.
| rozzy07 12/5/08 . chapter 3
Hm...things are certainly getting weird here. Chillingly so! Poor Dean, ever the man of action, being forced to become an observer with no power to help means for a few minutes of peaktime viewing it was literally hell on earth for him. The place is more than spook central, that's for sure, something dark and nasty is waiting there for our boys - I can feel it in my bones. As for the secret cameras, the illict shots of our boys doing all things natural - well that's just plain wrong! And another thing Julie and Chuck aren't quite normal either, are they Sifi?
As always its a slow reveal, as you add layer after layer, so things in time will become solid, tangible, defined. Just want more please - despite my lardy as*'d status of a late reviewer - Please!
| rozzy07 12/5/08 . chapter 2
Yep Sifi - I got sucked into a black hole, time slowed and then slipped into reverse before I got spat out the other end, a little bit frazzled, dazed and confused, but at least I string enough words together to give my thanks for another great chapter!
Dean watching Shakespeare and then his pointd questions and interaction with Sam later was a lovely turn. As for Sam his confession that he wanted Kitsune to want him for being 'Sam' really hit home. Dean confessing that had to be the case was a much needed boost for the boy, but I had to crack up a little when he confessed that he didnt know what to do with her socially as all they did was 'have sex"! Go, Sammy, Go...
Now on a plot note... things are going 'missing' - a tie and a knife may seem small fry...but I know how your mind words Oh-Devious-One and I am left waiting for the kick in the pants to come. Well I'm rushing over to feast on chapter 3 before another unnatural anomaly sucks me out of the space-time-continuum again! Rozzy.