Aww. Cute fic. That's probably my favourite scene in the whole movie.

one word- Beautiful!

Beautiful

Awesome fic.

I love getting into Edwards head in the special moment. It's great!

wow, this seems so... natural. like things they might really think. I've seen the movie, and I saw that whole scene again, ike the fic came alive. awesome

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oh my god it was so cool

aw. i loved it nice and sweet

Edwards POV is well written, good internat struggle and I like taht you kept it simple and short. Well done I liked it a lot.

cute! i love it :) and you're right, how can you possibly not move when edward cullen is kissing you? you can't! XD

like woah. i've read the bit of midnight sun on stephenie meyers site, and i loved the way she portrayed edwards mind, and how he overthought everything he did. and i must say, you did that absolutely amazingly. you seem to understand his mind so well! i obviously love it!

haha it annoyed me SO much at how long it took him to kiss her! i'm glad someone else acknowledged that! ;) well what can i say, it's amazing!

Wow so good well done! This was one of my favourite scenes in the movie, i loved edward's face when Bella rolled onto him. He was like ermm...what do i do now? BUG EYES. also his sunglasses rule! Very well done, keep writing! I'm going back to reading more of your stories now x

This was so unbelievably good! you captured edwards pov very well.