Very well written and a delight to read. Well done.

I really do wonder why this story doesnt have more reviews. It was wonderfully written, and everyone was perfectly in character. I really liked it, it was funny and sad but happy and heart warming at the same time. I wish that there were more stories like this one out there.

This story didn't get any reviews yet? Whoa. Over all I think it's well-written and you portrayed everyone's character perfectly, especially Axel and Xigbar (who are my favorites). Can't really say there's anything to correct, I personally think this is one of the best Organization XI fics I've read in a while!