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animchan
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
In here I could see how deep Kaname's love towards Yuuki, you did it well.. and I want more, akh!
ksienie
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful one-shot!
Even though he didn't lick the blood drops off her finger there is really a beautiful feeling in the story!
I'm at loss of words!
jeanita
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Woow:D
I have been looking for decent Vampire Knight fics for a LONG time, and who knew that I would find them as I searched for the release-date of the next Vampire Knight scan? I can't believe that you find time for all these things. I mean, scanning, translating(?) and writing FanFics? *Amazed*

Out of curiosity, are you a boy or a girl? (You don't have to answer if you feel offended by the question.)

Jeanita
paper piper
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Ah, that was beautiful.
sagittariusleo
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
I like this oneshot. I love everything about Kaname and his love for Yuuki. Thank you!
Ishasuki Mitochi
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
Aw, that's so sweet!

...Not in the way it would have been for a human... But Kaname's a vampire! Anyway, cute, cute, cute! ;)
O-Mega Lead
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
This was an extremely good fic, despite Kaname seeming slightly out of character. I loved how it was, sort of like the torment of Tantalus, where he had a taste of the forbidden and then could no longer have it (though in this case he willingly gave it up). I suppose that Tantalus is not the best example for it, but you get my point, ne? Also, I would like to say I loved the emotions you had in the story. While not as strong as they could have been had this been a longer one shot or a story, they still elicited good imagery, to the point that I could almost see Kaname yearn over the glass of diluted blood. All in all, a great one shot. Now, to the next one! By the way, this one shot has great potential... If I were you I would consider possibly turning this into a story; I could definitely imagine it as part of a series or either one-shots without Zero, or an actual story where Zero is in angst because her blood seems to more strongly crave Kaname and/or have Zero watch as Kaname and Yuuki get closer... Regardless, It was a great story!
VaneCaos
2009-01-20 . chapter 1
¡Hola! Desde que sé que puedes leer español creo que escribiré las review en mi idioma, así hacemos intercambio XD.
Como sé lo que te gusta Kaname he estado buscando si habías escrito algo KxY y me encantó este fic. Tiene ese aire inseguro, perezoso, sensual y oscuro que me imagino para esta pareja.

Lo que mas me gustó fueron las relexiones de Yuuki. Sobre todo su miedo a que Kaname pudiera sentir su amor y su deseo a través de la sangre. M...había poca sangre pero creo que podría ser un elemento interesante para una segunda parte. ¿Qué haría Kaname si pudiera sentir ese deseo a través de la sangre? *esto es una petición para que escribas un one-shot de segunda parte*.

También me gustó la sensación de Yuuki de que Kaname estaba haciendo algo muy íntimo con su sangre. En uno de los libros de Anne Rice hay una escena muy oscura con un vampiro y una mujer que tenía la menstruación. No sé por qué, pero tu fic me hizo recordar esa escena *soy una pervertida, lo sé*.

El toque fetichista de Kaname coleccionando objetos usados de Yuuki fue genial. Con un toque de dulzura, elegancia y perversión. Perfecto. El toque inseguro y tímido de Kaname también me llegó al corazón, ya te imaginas por qué. Muchos lectores ven a Kaname como una especie de dios sexual *risita*, pero a mí me gusta más imaginármelo sensual pero frágil y vulnerable en ese aspecto, al menos hasta que despierte ;-D.

Me encantó. A ver si tengo tiempo para leerme otras historias tuyas. Hay tantas donde elegir que no sé por dónde empezar. Hey, y si me respondes a esta review hazlo en inglés. Es genial este cruce de idiomas, así las dos podemos decir lo que realmente queremos, sin pelearnos con las palabras.

Un abrazo y un beso,

Vane
truehazel
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
If it had been licked off, that would have been really hot. I could just imagine, because if Kaname was that affected by her diluted blood then imagine how he would feel with the real stuff.
I love KanamexYuuki. But, I htink the great thing about Vampire knight is that it's hard to root for one guy over the other. Because they both love her so much and she loves them. Ah damnit! So torn...
Hehe, good oneshot.

jEsSi
Midnight x Poker
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Hey x

Simply adorable ^-^ You write KanaYuuki so expertly! *is extremely jealous* I kinda liked that you didn't have him lick her finger. It's so overdone now. Your way was much more creative and interesting.

Great job~!

Ariana x
Shizuka no Taisho
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
aw...such a waste

Poor Kaname. If I were him, I would've jumped her and eagerly sucked her blood in an instant
Angel-wing2
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Amazing!~ I love your fics so much. Kaname and Yuuki are the best couple ever! ^^
Blackened Wing
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
LOL dang, I just feel so sorry for Kaname. *wants desperately to hug him*. He's such an absolute sweetheart.

This was really well written, I like the interactions between the two of them, and how Kaname always puts Yuki's feelings first. You have a knack for making me love him ever more and more utterly. ;)

Mm.mm.mm... yes... next time he should lick her finger... *huge grin* XD
jiru-senpai
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
That was... sad. (laughs) But slightly romantic at the same time. :)
arya21
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
OKAY, KANAME WAS FAR TOO KIND AND LOVING I'M STARTING TO LIKE HIM MORE AND MORE THAN ZERO

GREAT WORK :D
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