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ithilgalad75
2009-10-09 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved this fic! It was so very well handled, the aftermath of Remnants and the attack/suicide, with our fav guys saying what needed to be said without being mushy about it. You walked a fine line and pulled it off with flying colours. Terrific writing!
Raven2004
2008-12-20 . chapter 3
I loved the way you picked apart the character's brains. Their reasons for reacting (in their individual ways) to the AI in Remnants seemed spot-on! It's as if you know the characters as well as the TV writers. Awesome job with the story!
Raven2004
2008-12-20 . chapter 2
It's very difficult to capture the true essense of the characters but you did just that. The story is believable and flows. Sheppard's heartache was almost tangible (sp?) and I felt myself being drawn closer and closer to the computer monitor. Awesome job!
Fandomatic
2008-12-19 . chapter 3
I stand in awe of your character analysis.
BlondieChemGirl
2008-12-13 . chapter 3
Your depth of investigation into these characters and their doubts and fears is amazing. You were able to get into each of their heads and bring out exactly what they needed to say to one another. The story was so moving. This wasn't some fun drabble adventure, this was a psychological mind piece that has giving me a deeper insight into "Remnants". Excellent piece of writing and I am inspired by your work. Please let us know if you get some recongnition for this piece - an award or something. Thank you for a truely great read. BlondieCG
Jordan-Daniel
2008-12-05 . chapter 3
Simply stunning, breath-taking and amazing! I watched the episode and now read your story. I can`t come to a different conclusion: excellent story!
Obsessed Pam
2008-11-29 . chapter 3
This was a haunting piece which held me captive in its powerful grip from start to finish. Spellbinding writing - you really do have a handle on this craft of story writing!
Obsessed Pam
2008-11-29 . chapter 2
Sheppard's introspection reveals a hauntingly vulnerable side to this normally confident man. Great writing!
Stargate Groupie
2008-11-24 . chapter 3
This was an amazing tale and I feel that you brought some closure to the episode. I really loved reading this. Thank you for sharing.
mtee1958
2008-11-24 . chapter 3
Great story. I like that Shep realized that it wasn't the torture but the escape that mattered. That concept hadn't occurred to me.

Thank you.
drufan
2008-11-23 . chapter 3
This was just perfect. Nice exploration and investigation into the characters. I especially liked Teyla taking Ronon and Rodney helping Sheppard. Nice way to split it up. Absolutely lovely.
godsdaughter77
2008-11-23 . chapter 3
Excellent story and great tag to the episode! I loved all the stuff between Rodney and John in this and how Rodney managed in his own way to say the right thing! Good job!
Dybdahl
2008-11-23 . chapter 3
I like the story. Nice conclusion to an episode that didn't really give us one.
godsdaughter77
2008-11-23 . chapter 2
Great chapter! I liked Woolsey's point that John didn't start really fighting the mind control until Rodney was threatened. Thanks for posting the 3rd chapter with this one! :D
ClaMiAl
2008-11-23 . chapter 3
A beautiful story. Simply beautiful. I loved it. I especially liked how the changing point of vies made it possible to see every character both from an inside and an outside perspective. Very well done.
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