*loves*

This is quite lovely. It is sad that there are so few stories for this movie and book, but you capture the quality of the canon wonderful in the little details like the cloverdilly beer and the fact that Johhny likes being able to see her when she talks.

Very cute (: I just recently bought the movie and watched it tonight and already I am claiming it as one of my many favorite movies. Also; you write beautifully.

Love this! I have not came across fics based on the sense like this before- great idea! Love it!

Interesting, good interesting, but still interesting.

It was pretty good, but I think you should have made a five chapter ficlet for each sense with an actual story behind each one. It would have made it much more entertaining. But, your writing was good. Oh, and what happened to touch?

I liked that!

It was a sweet story!

Awesome fic:D It's definitely unique from all the others I've read before. However, some of your sentences in the last paragraph may be grammatically incorrect. ( "..he just loves matching the voice to the eyes, the face, the first he is sensitive...")

Shouldn't it be "he just loves matching the voice to her eyes and to her face.. At first he was sensitive about touching her nose, but Penelope... " ?

Just a thought. But you're the author, so feel free to do whatever and whenever. :)

Gracias, and cuidate mucho:)

Very good. I loved the whole 5 senses spin you put on it.

I love this pairing and am glad SOMEONE posted a story for it!yay for you shallowness!

i love it, u should really make an actual story for penelope

I do wish there were more penelope fanfics...

i really love that movie.

yours is short, but very good :)

I don't see why there isn't a lot more Penelope fic out there. Such a sweet movie.

Good job!

very sweet if you ever wrote another one, i will be very happy to read it

This was lovely. So sweet and cleverly written!

It was a cute story. I loved the movie and the way they got to know each other and fall in love. You should write more for this category.