aw sweet- that's just the type of thing he would do for her- very well written v. angsty

ya know- there's not enough players fic out there :D

alien

I really like this, good n, gut wrenching.I especially like the phonse chrissie don,t you write them some capture both of them very well.

Somehow I can just imagine Alphonse doing that for Chrissy. I'm glad they never got together in the show, though, 'cause it was more fun with him trying to get her all the time. More? You can never have too much Players fan-fic.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww! sweet! wonderful! you made me cry I was that worried he was gonna die! it's so beautifully written! The whole idea of it is great but torturous of corse. I'm so glad you gave it a happy ending :o)