| Reviews for Unfrozen Thoughts |
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mjmusiclover 10/13/09 . chapter 1wow that was amaazing :D very beautiffuly done :D |
Plastic Cello 8/5/09 . chapter 1I love this sequel to "Unfreezing Ron Weasley", and I am looking forward to "Unfreezing Draco Malfoy". The characterization is splendid. :) |
carentan 7/30/09 . chapter 1 I ADORED this! I love how you fit the 2 perspectives together. And I love how you fit it all into the fabric of HBP. This was my favorite part: "He saw me. Me alone. He touched every square centimetre of me. He looked at me. I was single. I was not a gang of brothers, a dorm of boys, a class of pupils or a trio of heroes. I was one me: Ronald Bilius Weasley. He was two hands, two eyes, one mouth." Nicely done, bravo! |
Utena-Puchiko-nyu 7/21/09 . chapter 1So sad ;.; I got for the lat part. Kisses from Argentina! |
wrappedinharry 3/3/09 . chapter 1Very nice introspection from both boys. That last thought of Draco's was an eye-opener. How will he feel when he realises that he has poisoned the one he is fantasising over. Interesting... Lesley |
remuslives23 1/5/09 . chapter 1I loved the to and froing of the different POV's. I was a little confused at first as I wasn't expecting it but loved it by the end. Loved this in particular: "Sometimes it’s like I can smell him … Sometimes I can almost smell him. I remember what his voice sounded like saying my first name. I hear how he cried out my name when he climaxed." Loved how you had them thinking identical thoughts there and finishing each other's thoughts just before this...fabulous! |
stuckinsea 11/23/08 . chapter 1I was so happy to get a message from you that you written another part to your first tale. I liked seeing both of their sides of that night and trying to cope with their day to day lives, trying to find a balance to either move on or possibly find a way to act on their feelings. I'd love to see you go on with this story...thank you again for sharing it. Well done. |
SuperSonicLoveMuffin 11/23/08 . chapter 1I L.O.V.E.D the first one & I L.O.V.E the second one! Now I wonder...will There Be A *THIRD-ONE*? o_O LoL C'mon you kno you want To! _ P.s...thanks for email and sequel i hope theres a THIRD! Ur a very talentedcreative writer. I love the way u done each of there POVs in this fic. It wus a very VERY nice touch! I gonna put u on *Alert* AGAIN! NaNaNaNaNa Haha lol SuperSonicLoveMuffin |
translucency for summertime 11/22/08 . chapter 1 Egads! How perfectly lovely! I enjoyed the first part of this story line, and I think that this is a nice addition to it. The splitting up of POVs was a nice idea. How everything meshed together was well thought out. And now I go geek out over the Twilight movie. D |
TorturebyAssociation 11/22/08 . chapter 1It Lives! XD I thought maybe you'd forgotten about a sequel or maybe it just wasn't going to work out. Loved it. Bunches. I hope there'll be a third sequel. No presure though. And I wonder how true to the original story line your going to go with these? |
Rin5o 11/22/08 . chapter 1 Simply beautiful! I've been absolutely crazy about Unfreezing Ron Weasley after I read it quite a time ago, and the sequel is great too. I love the light manner of narration and how each of the boys has his own voice, especially in the second story. Hope you will continue, I' love some more gourgeousness! |