I absolutely love this story! I find myself thinking of it a few times a day and am constantly checking back on your page for updates. I can't wait to see how Zero is eventually going to try to save Kaname! There's so many things that still need to be worked out.

I can't wait to see Zero kiss him and I'm sure eventually even let himself be the Uke. Is there any more intimate way to shows he loves the vampire then to let Kaname top him?! But I'm guessing it will be many chapters before Kaname understands that Zero isn't purposefully messing with him.

It isn't just the love story that makes me think of it but also my twisted side that likes to see the normally strong Kaname portrayed as so helpless during the non-con scenes. The ruthless abandonment his rapists show while they 'rent' him is kind of hot simply because it's such a departure from how he's treated in almost every other Fic.

Thanks so much for your hard work and amazing writing talents and I'll be hanging on every word as you publish each chapter!

-Tracey

I absolutely love this story! It really pulled me in and now I'm totally hooked.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!

X3

I will do my best to review your stories! I absolutely love them!

That was an amazing chapter and of course I wanted Zero to kiss Kaname in the end but that's why you are the master author and I am the addicted reader! =D

This is going to be one of the longest stories of the VK fics and I'm loving it! I hope it goes on forever (even though my heart probably can't take the anticipation of happy and lemony outcomes).

You are a fantastic writer and while I'm waiting for the chapters in this one, I'm going to read through all your other stories (this is one of the first of yours I have come across in searches)

Thanks so much for your hard work and I'll wait patiently (*ok maybe not SO patiently but as much as a puppy who wants his favorite treat can sit still*) for each continuation!!

-BG

HI!
I absolutely love CoB, and would like to thank Sagakure for bringing such interesting ideas and enjoyable moments during my boring highschool career. And please finish this fanfic soon, because i'm dying to to the result. Thank you!

BTW, the phrase "due to" is not supposed to be used in writing, cuz that's like a writing rule. I don't know why, because we learned about it in class, but i thought it would be nice if I pointed it out. =]

-slams head against the wall-
Sorry my mind went down the gutter for a second... The almost kiss scene was so similar to something that really happened, and i'm still regretting not damning it all and kiss the guy...
Zero kiss him! No one can resist Kaname's beautiful sweetness <3

Zero should show Kaname vulnerability by letting Kanmae take him first instead.

lovely story, plot, and ..just lovely xD.

I espcially like that ; Kaname is not all "omg im so weak, please pity me" whiny and stuff.

It's really realistic and deep. Good job!:]!

At last, SGK! As mentioned before, I love this chapter and am so glad Kaname managed to ask Zero not to leave. Poor hunter’s beside himself with guilt… and Kaname’s so adorable for confessing that he’s scared of losing Zero forever *melts at the hug and at both their thoughts*

Oh, yummy 2nd licking session! LOL, you write awkward situations well – I was trying so hard not to laugh when they both started talking of bandages, of all things! *smothers giggles* The poor dears…

I like how Kaname’s making more attempt to voice what he wants even though he still fears the worst – it shows he’s really opening up to the hunter (or to his fate at Zero’s hands). LOL… Zero and his mental images at the ‘tie me up’ words! *smiles* Don’t blame you one bit, Zero – Kaname’s so irresistable even with those awful bruises but oh man, it’s sad that the pureblood’s used to being tied up *takes out her tattered list and stares glumly at it* I should tie up all these people before killing them…

Oh dear, those shackles and gag sound horrid! *wants to throw them away forever* And the familiar way Kaname put them on was horribly realistic too *cries* What a struggle for Zero but thank goodness, Kaname’s fear helped him *is vastly relieved*

Loved that gentle hug and the fact that it was Kaname who fell asleep first! :D Horrible nightmares for him though, all mixed up with Zero…

Oh no, Kaname put on those shackles and things too tightly! But yes, that was due to his training *reminds herself to shackle all those on her list very, very tightly before doing them in* Still, Zero was wonderfull when he kissed Kaname’s bruised skin *squeals* I did wish he had licked them *winks*

‘“If there’s one thing I didn’t want, it’s to give you any more bruises than you already have.”’ – this has to be the sweetest sentence in this whole chapter!

*squeaks and watches almost kiss with bated breath* Oh darn, I so wish Zero HAD kissed Kaname, that would really have made his day (with all the cute blushing and wondering). Of course Kaname would think it impossible since he didn’t know that Zero actually wanted to kiss him… *sighs and wants to kiss his tears away* That was such a heart wrenching picture of him sitting by that door with his arms around his knees…

Yes, Zero, I wish you would kiss Kaname senseless too – and it’s not unattainable!! Don’t make us wait too long for the next chapter, Sagakure!

OMG *_*
that was ... I'm speachless!I love this fic so much !
( I think I like it more than VK :O)

...update SOON ...
*_*

Im finally reading COB due to curiosity :P its good so far though I have a question... first chapter the hunter with zero... is that Kaien?

I'm loving it.

It breaks my heart to think our pureblood must go thru that. A lot of hurt, I hope he can trust that Zero wouldn't hurt him. I guess it's from his past experiences that he gets that way.

I like the long chapters, you're so talented. I plan to write a Zero/Kaname soon after I finish UNTIL YOU. since you like the scene where Zero takes Kaname in INSATIABLE.

Me likey likey, another great chappie

Gosh, you've made me cry. But I like the story line so I'll continue although I see nothing but blur