Ah-May-zing!
I love this story so much! :D
one of the best ! :D

Aw! That was the best! Totally made my day with it's amazing 3/4-ness. Goodness sakes, they are the cutest couple ever. Great story!
-Sunday

EVERYTHING about this story makes me happy, but my favorite part was definitely when 2 and 5 were like 8D TAKE PICTURES NAO.

Very lovely. It makes my inner fangirl VERY happy.

OMG! I absoulutley LOVEE THIS STORY! this was amazing!

hey that was a awesome story but you put couldn't instead of could in that line. I know when you lisen to her sing it sounds like she said couldn't but i have the cd with the book of lyrics and it says could. but otherwise great story and i love this song. nobody uses it anymore so keep up the good work

Aw, the fluff makes me smile. I was giggling like mad as soon as Wally said "take my hand."

God, I love it and I have to say it is an excellent improvement more the last version. Oh, I hope that didn't sound rude. I didn't mean for it too...

I hope you turn it in to a drabble series, I'd love to read more from you.

Yeah, uh, bye.

- Lullaby :)

Wow that is long
i think this is an excellent improvement from what it was
i really like the parts with the stars cause you can really picture it happening
were they 16 last time by the way??
I think drabbles would be good but don't ask me what it could be on (haha i am so unhelpful lol)
hope you write again soon :)

Love it!
you should totally continue.
I like the drabbles idea.

Some song ideas:
Death cab for cutie;
I will follow you into the dark
Soul meets body

Jeff Buckley;
Hallelujah(you must have seen that coming from a mile away.)

Lifehouse;
You and me
First time

Elvis Presley/UB40;
I Can't Help Falling In Love With You

Now which couple for which song? Well, I'll let you decide. It's your story after all.
Hope you update soon!

I think I remember the original but I didnt review it. sorry about that. But anyways I absolutely love this one! Ordinary Day is such a great song! And I actually know the video you were talking about! It's awesome! and I'd say your writing has improved. :)
I'd love to keep reading a series of drabbles done by you so thats my thought on that.
as for the 2/5 song that would go with it hmm...the only ones I can think of are Drops of Jupiter (its already been done for a 1/362 and I dont know if its been done for anything else) and maybe if you're looking for something a little different, Here Without You by 3 Doors Down.
but maybe I just thought of those cuz they are 2/5 videos on youtube! ha!
anyways they're just suggestions but I hope you decide on a song if you do decide to do the drabbles.
(sorry about such a long review!)

-chants- Two and Five, Two and Five, Two and Five! Whoo hoo!
I like this version better than the first. Your writing has definitely changed. Much better, if you don't mind me saying so.
-chants again- Three and Four, Three and Four, Three and Four!

Drabble series eh? How about a 2/5 with the song Crazy For This Girl by Evan and Jaron? (I think I misspelled the artists, forgive me.) Or how about Just The Girl by The Click Five? Or flip the table and do Crush by Mandy Moore?
My brain is asleep currently. Maybe I'll think of a better song later. Or you can totally disregard this whole review because it made you go insane because I fail at reviewing.
And I have had Coco Pops. They are delicious.
I'll stop wasting valuable reviewing space.
♥Jess

I like It, and i love the song.

that was really good i loved it and the new word for ROFL is ROFLMAO (Rolling On Floor Laughing My ** Off)

kool bi

aww!! this was so CUTE!!

cute!
this was so sweet!!
i loved the part when Numbuh 2 and 5 went into the SCAMPER to go off to the moon base to tell the good news!!

Thanks for checking out my 3/4 stories! Yours was too cute! Go 3/4!