i really like this story, the love triangle is gonna be great. but its sorta going to fast, so slow it down a little and add more detail. update soon!

that was an awesome story u should toataly update

Generally I find these things a little MS, but this is good and Luna isnt an outright sue. I like her, and I like how she doesnt like Emma.

Who is Zuna paired with?

Good beginning so far, but it seems to be going a little too fast. This is just my opinion, but Tancred crushing on one girl the moment he sees her is... somewhat out of character. Have some more development and add a little chemistry between the two, and it'll turn out great.

Is it going to be CharlieEmma? =^_^=