The family just loves to hate Edward's fun-spoiling, don't they ;)?
"I could take the human home," :D Priceless how Edward refers to Bella as 'the human'!

One of the best one-shots I have read (in general). Amazing little snippet and quite true. Lovely work!

I'm so sorry I'm the 81st review! I didn't mean to screw up the awesome review count you had. >.> Sorry.

Anyways, wow, great dialouge. The whole paragraph about Emmett's hands and how he killed for her was great. I never really looked at it quite that way. It really made the whole one-shot in my opinion. :)

Good ending line, too.

-Katie.

aw

aw. that was adorable. i really enjoyed it. i usually totally ignore short fics, they're like a tease (i want at least 20k!), but this one was perfect ^_^.

i got tears in my eyes :) so sweet.

I love little "missing moments". So well done!

:)

aw. I like reading about the development of other characters. I liked reading about how Bella realized that she is important to the Cullen family :)

cute! very cute!
i love how you use Midnight Sun at the end. it's pretty rare around this fandom.
great fic.

That was so sweet, and so something that could have happened in the book. I loved it.

aw, this was so cute.

Don't think I ever reviewed this one--but wanted to say wow. I felt like tearing up at the end. Thanks for a good short one.

aw wonderful story! This is exactly what Bella would say hehe :)

Great story!!

Oh I love it!