HA!

I love the Calm Marilee tactic Geoff has! It's weird, but it's awesome! :)

Oh! Hey, it's Ceith!LOL.

A walk to remember was awesome! Sad, though...I hope Courtney doesn't get leukemia and die-...Wait...Can't spoil the movie!

I <3 Marilee she cracks me up!

"AND MORE!" Awesome, awesome pun!

Heh... Mom's new guy has to good because he looks rich and could buy their approval. Not the way to open Marilee's mind, Geoff.

Chris could've sounded a lot smarter if he didn't insist on trying to defend his choice for the challenge title. Could've just said "I liked the pun" instead of trying to explain why the name makes sense.

I'm probably not the only one who'd have never realized that Herbie wasn't the one who was afraid of pirates if he hadn't brought it up. It's kinda' sad that their own sister can hardly remember which one is which, though, much less me.

Heh... when Chris takes over Mobius, that's the way everyone will spell Ceith's name... and Courtney's right. It is stupid. It looks like it should be pronounced as "Seith." Chris seems to have gotten you to change the spelling in the narration, even!

And I guess the world is back to making sure Marilee remains miserable. Stealing her best boots, making her walk through the forest barefoot, and getting a stone lodged in her foot... and Geoff, you're not really one to complain, Mr. Splinter! So glad Marilee called him on that!

OK, you don't usually think of juice boxes being able to calm teenagers like that... she really likes her juice boxes, I guess?

I dunno'... if the team found out, wouldn't Izzy be the most likely one to be voted off? Then again, considering the universe is usually out to get Marilee, Geoff probably had a good point.

Haha! LURVE it!

I luffed all the screentime Geoff and Marilee got! They're so funny! And poor Ceith... I wonder if he'll get his old name back... xD

Grace was so funny! And Chef has more than head weight problems xD

Haha, awesome! Can't wait for more! And Happy Thanksgiving!

This story is one of my favorite stories ever! Yesterday, I started to read this from the beginning and was surprised at how good it was! (Okay, I do know that you're a good writer, but I've only read your shorter stories. This kind of thing is on a completely different level.)
Number one, it's LONG! Thank you for making it so long! I'm sick of reading stories that are only a few chapters long, where you have to wait for months to get a new chapter.
Two, it's really really amazing. And funny. Especially all of the OC's. I love Marilee, Candace, Keith, Grace. Officially, Candace/Geoff and Marilee/Keith are my favorite couples ever.
This review might be sort of long, because I'm going to pack my opinions on all of the chapters into one...
Okay, first off, the baby simulators were hilarious. I suddenly had a flashback to Zack and Cody, during that one episode where Maddie and London had to take care of baby simulators. Especially when Grace threw the baby off the cliff and Zoey named hers London.
The running gag with people throwing their babies off high surfaces was so funny. Every time it happened, I nearly cried from laughter. Several quotes from that episode went on my amazing quote wall because they were so funny.
When you voted off Zack, I nearly screamed. Even though I saw it coming, I was VERY VERY angry. Thankfully, I calmed down while reading about Marilee and Keith. Yay!
Also, something that I find people rarely comment on that I sort of wish they would. I think your chapter titles are pretty freakin' awesome. When I read them, I crack up because most of them are such clever/hilarious comments on the chapters.
The second Bridgette broke up with Geoff (rather clever plot device there, I've got to say) I was like: "PLEASE PLEASE LET HER SET HIM UP WITH SOMEONE ELSE!" Thankfully, you got my mental messages, and set him up with Candace.
Lastly, lets rewind to almost the very beginning. I loved the challenge where you had to avoid fighting with your "sibling." Courtney was seriously my favorite character for just that one episode. Marilee came in a close second.
I was seriously sad when Rikki and Jackson were voted off, but at least you gave them that cameo in the Playa de Losers episode.
Well, my only request is that you give Xavier and Herbie more screen time. And I ask for Grace to do more evil things. Thanks! Keep writing!
-SummerEliza

Huh, I could make a really crude joke right now about that Izzy but I'll choose not to.
Huh a Twilight reference. Would I be correct in assuming you are a fan?
...No comment. lol
I wouldn't be suprised if he didn't know either Duncan. Owen sure is...innocent.
Dang, kitty has claws! And a bulldozer Ronny? Don't you think that's a little extreme?
Is she serious about not knowing what Anger is?
Poor Kimmy...I mean Candy.
And now Chris is being outshined and yet still somehow doesn't care. What a dick.
Yeah Chef, keep thinking that.
God, I can only imagine your horror DJ. Makes me glad my siblings are more restrained...in public.
God, you go to the Dark Place fast don't you Geoff?
Don't worry Geoff we know you're not a drunk.
Yeah, work that rage Marilee.
Such a cute couple G/C, thanks for the great couple Kel. Wait a minute I finally get what the title means! Stupid Clark.
Makes sense Jo.
Of course these two wouldn't be into sharing. Nice fight scene Kel, though I do feel bad for Duncan though. At this rate he'll be a eunuch. Better start wearing a cup bro.
Huh, the ending reminds me of Left 4 Dead where your teammates can leave your ** to die to the Horde so they can escape. Except in this case it's fnny.
You need to watch more tv Chris. Woah that's an ironic statement.
Love the twist at the eliminations Kel!
Be grateful this isn't TDA Courtney.
Wow, Owen. Didn't see that coming.
Poor Ron.
lol That joke at the end was worth him getting elminated!
Please do Dad.
Aw! Thata boy Duncan!
Huh, she actually bought it. LOL
Wow, Geoff more devious/smarter than we gave him credit for! XD Awesome!
Don't worry Geoff, I would have done the same thing!
Awesome finale with Izzy! Nice to see a cute moment with these two. Normally fics about them are...weird. But this scene was just preceious. Wish I could have seen Ron go crazy fighting her, but the Duncan fight was even cooler.
Sorry for the late review Kel, I tried to send one weeks ago but it wouldn't send and Ihad a lot of other stuff stopping me from making another one. So what's the next challenge going to be about?
Keep up the great work! Update Soon!

YAYZ! Quick update! :D

Loved it! The Geoff/Candace was so sweet! And Owen was too funny! Poor guy got voted off :(

Ah well. Loved it! :D

PPMS!

I was laughing so hard at Marilee's line about Herbie and Xavier being the least noticeable contestants on the show. It's completely true: I usually forget they're there too!

On a semi-related note, Selena had an unusually tiny role for this chapter. Guess she was due for a short break.

Tee hee... yay for Marilee's punching bag line! Really, she has had it rough, though. Girl deserves a break finally! And... genetics. Of course! Geoff and Bridgette, Marilee and Keith... it makes perfect sense!

Heh... guess the rent-a-cop joke had to be made, and Izzy was really the most likely one to do it.

Candace is pretty gullible... Duncan's lie to get him and Geoff alone was about the least believable thing he could've come up with, especially when he couldn't keep the lie straight, and she still fell for it! Nice to see her angrier side come out, anyway. And "rawr, I'm gonna beat you up"!

Wow, better review this double time!
lol Courtney is a Grammar Nazi! Give you any ideas Kel?
Of course Owen isn't one for being quiet is he? lol
God Leshawna, you're tough and all, and I respect you, but you really need to get into better shape.
Is Izzy even sure that's mud?
God, these scenes with Marilee are hilarious! They're going to make me pee!
I do Izzy!
Hmm...wonder how she'll react?
I say keep staring Keith.
That's all that matters Keith.
Nice work Gwen! Totally got one up on Grace for once!
I could go on about how awesome Ron is. But that'd take too long. Suffice to say he's awesome in all his moments this chapter. Especially when he commented on Marilee's apparel.
Theatrics don't usually work in real life.
Geeze, Owen isn't really subtle is he!
We all share your pain Candance.
Reference!
Hehe! In your face Grace!
Ron does look like he doesn't bath.
Uh Oh. If the Wolves loose Duncan's gonna be in trouble.
Wow, Selena's really going all out.
Wow, this moment between Keith and Marilee is so adorable! You definately should have written season 2 Kel.
Oh well. Selena could only go so far I guess.
Wow, Selena, when I thought you had grew a heart. lol Way to go Courtney!
lol Hey Selena, want some aloe vera for that burn? Hehe. I don't dislike Selena. I love her. She's just so funny.
Darn it Chef! What did Courtney do!
Wow that's a weird scar origin. Sounds familiar.
Cool! One day before mine!
Aw that's so cool!
Man, these histories are really...depressing. But I love them! They're so cute together!
AW! So cute! ^\^ I'm a sucker for a good romance.
Way to go Ron Bane! I never actually expected you to use my quotes so literally! I'm flattered Kel. Thank you.
I don't think you're Hitler Duncan.
Poor Cody. He got shot and we're watching this odd family moment.
Wow, even Candance is getting into the act...and it's gone!
Run you two run!
"...I might have to make a second trip..."
Geoff whining is hilarious!
Eww is right Geoff. It's gross watching your relatives make out.
You know, I half expected Keith at one point to go on about seeing Marilee's butt. I mean, the kids a teenager. When we were kids if I boy didn't want to see boobs, he'd want to see butt. And Keith got to see both earlier than most of us! Lucky Bastard!
Well I got to go read and review your next chapter! Keep up the great work!

Bye OWEN! We shalt not forget thee... wtf! lol
The Marilee and Keith was TOTALLY like GxB awkwardness just like how jovie said. Can't wait for more

loved it!

:D

Love it! I loved all that yummy Marilee/Keith goodness! So sweet!! And Owen! He was so funny when he asked about being an uncle! xD

Haha, brilliant! And sorry it took a while... Heh, didn't get the alert ^^"

Anyhoo, LURVE it! Cannot wait for more! :D

Yay for Marilee and Keith finally kind of officially getting together! Marilee often feels like the show's punching bag (and Keith mostly Marilee's punching bag--guess she needed to take it out on someone!), and I love that she finally gets to be happy and open. Just so sweet!

Poor Selena. I kinda' feel bad for her. She's trying to be nice, even if she's not that good at it.

I'm curious who Trent could date that wouldn't be "a dumb stupid head like Gwen." Just have this feeling that Grace would feel that anyone Trent were going out with wouldn't be up to Grace's standards.

i luv this story not bad i the character i like is grace the devil her self x_x u should finish it good luck! x_x

School is a **. 'Nuff said.
Hmm...what's more annoying people staring cause they hate you or because they feel bad for you?
Aw! That's so sweet and in-character of her! It is going to be so hard for her if she has to go against Zack later won't it?
Great, Selena's trying to be nice and Courtney's being paranoid. lol
Owen's a little slow ain't he? Glad he's not the over protective type though?
This ruined moment was brought to you by Owen. XD
God I loved this scene, I could imagine the forced smile so clearly in my brain! XD
Run Owen! DECAF COFFEE! and wedges of doom for the win!
Almost made it without a mark Owen.
Shoes used for evil? Hmm...
I see a new conflict in the works. Poor Owen. He'd probably blame me for this.
Saved by the gun...wait.
When I first read how they paniced I figured Keith took advantage of the chaos to just get back at Marilee with some OJ.
Nice reference Kel. Always wanted to see that movie.
Boney Island! *wiggles fingers*
I really liked how you gave each team different uniforms. Wolves get the strips and Bears get the orange jumpsuits. Should make it easier to tell the teams apart now.
God, their list of crimes was hilarious! You should have written for TDA.
Guess we shouldn't tell Zoey he was trying to lie to her.
OMG! That was hilarious! I could actually see Grace going off on Chef like a freakin' pitbull! Hilarious!
coughsissycough
With a Spork she could claw through the stone walls themselves!
Nice way to keep the drama going.
And the drama just keeps on going with Heather and Gwen.
Way to go Heather! And Zoey and Courtney bonding is so cute!
I can tell this is hurting Selena.
Really oringinal way for Izzy to break out. Didn't see that coming.
lol Al Capone.
Hooray for references! TDA and Kim Possible!
Wow, Keith is going to have a hard time not saying.
lol I love puns.
Poor Owen. "But I don't wanna use my head!"
Yay! Ron the Rent-a-Cop! I can't wait to talk about him some more Kel! He's going to be fun!
Keep up the great Kel!