Hurry update I'm dying to know what happens! :D Well done!

this is AWESOME

its so good to actually see rose struggle a bit... she's not a rock, and she's not the perfect guardian, she's just as flawed and human as she exists in the books... i get the feeling that we won't get a happy ending here, and we'll be in for the long haul, but i think i'm ok with that :)

poor rose.. i cant wait for the book to come out :)

Excellent!

Really, really good! So glad that you updated.

Although there was no fighting in this chapter, it was eventful. Very well written. Great job.

I enjoyed reading this, I was suprised to see Tobias here, but I enjoyed how you incorperated him in it. Great job.

I liked the old guy. He was cool. But anyway, I liked the chapter, and I can't wait to read more. I personally think she's being too hard on herself, but of course she can't hear me, and you're doing that on purpose, so that doesn't really matter. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you what I thought.

Poor Rose. Was the guy on the train that guardian who used to love that teacher from the first book?

Wow, wow, wow!

Have loved reading this story - your writing style is so good; you write in Rose's voice v well.

Great job!

I like keep it up

You must continue with this story. I can't even imagine what is going to happen next, with Dimitri, the blue-eyed girl, Lissa's shock and joy... although I have an idea at what that might be. I really can't wait to read more, so please post soon anki145

You're a good writer, im enjoying the story, it could be a real one of Richelles. I think you should continue, I'd like to see where this was going.

I LOVE IT!

please continue ]