Hi there. I played the game at least about 4 times in the old PlayStation years ago and when my PS died, I found myself now halfway through the game again in my PS Portable. I just recently discovered FFnet and thought to look for a BoF3 novelization story, then I stumbled upon yours. I enjoy your novelization because of the colors and emotions you were able to place in the story. I guess I can finally move on from playing the game over and over because I have your story to read. Oh yeah, I especially like the scenes you made with Momo and Rei. That's what I think was missing in the game.

This is a great, amazing story! And are you still planning to novelize Alundra? ALundra is such an amazing game that never gets the attention it deserves! I truly hope you still plan on novelizing Alundra. That would be spectacular, and who knows, maybe more people would start sumbitting Alundra fanfiction!

Holy cow, Its been about 2 years since i last got on FanFiction, and what do i see on the top page? THIS STORY IS FINISHED? And i get not only 1 shout out, but 3?! (Mega Edgar, Zero, Eddy) lol
Well, Its a great thing you finished this, ill start reading it again later, College has been kicking me in the ** lately so i dont have much spare time. I think the last chapter i read was the return to the light house O-o

Awesome! You found something you like to do (novelizations). You're very good at it. If you do become a Publishing author in original stories leave a message on your profile, id gladly buy your books :)

Ugh! I hated to see Myria die. She wasn't evil, all this time she was just misguided and over protective. I loved your story, but just upset, almost in tears, that so many disliked her -- such a pretty woman to have died, especially with her sister. I would hope for them to have survived, but just weakened. I love Myria..can't stop thinking about her. Good job!

So, that lizard thing in the lighthouse, was that a real lizard or just a statue that came to life? It creeped me out as well when I saw it in the game -- gave me nightmares trying to figure what is was, who it was, etc. I mean, how did it get there...did the faeries put it there, was it a friend of the faeries?

Other than that, good job!

hee, and we finally get to the end! i love the song in the story ^_^ really sets the mood! i loved how everyone was revisited at the end on the day :) i bet you are happy to be finished! feels great, eh? haha it looks like i finally caught up, eh? anyway, great story! i loved every mintue of it ^_^ see ya next time!

Ah, the scene between Momo and Rei was great- because you could just feel the awkwardness between them. :D I also like that you added reasons as to why the both of them came on the journey.

And the Nina and Ryu scene; WHOOBANGBASHHUZZAHCRASHWOOP! That's my attempt at your awesome thing from the last chapter (yours is better though.) I love the idea that their kiss is 'nostalgic'- it adds a totally new dimension to Nina/Ryu romance. And also, that it's a love that transends time- well, that's just cute. ^^

Ah, this was the chapter you got stuck on? I remember you telling me about it now. I'm glad you managed to figure it out.

well we've finally come to the end haven't its kinda sad its the end but it had to have happened at some time and such a great ending to well i guess this is good bye its been a honor to meet your aquaintence and a honor to read your great story take care

well... the circle finally has come to be full.

a really nice piece of work :)

although i'm more into BoF2 (first rpg that i bought with my own dough; had played others, but the catridges were from other friends), BoF3 is a more overall fun game; as you say it, it portrays Dragons as mystical beings, as you say it, not very like western lore. I share your vision on that ;).

Well, really and thoroughly enjoyed.
see you soon, and will be waiting for the Alundra novel that you're going to write :D (going to get that CD in working order so i can finish that game once and for all :P).

Hello there! I just finished reading your novelization and I have to say I loved it! It really brought me back to the first time I played BoF3!

I really liked how you portrayed everyone, and that the scenes never felt forced, or ill fitting. The pace was also wonderful as well, a bit fast, but in a way that still fills in all the info and doesn't make it drag on. I almost wept salty tears with the Nu scene myself.

Great work! I'll be eagerly waiting to read any other stories you put out.

A great ending, I was hoping for a little Ryu/Nina in the epilogue considering she's always been with him during the cycle but I suppose one can't have everything.

Wow, finally you finished it!! I was reading it for long time, but i didn't wrote a review .. sorry for that :P
The text is awesome and you have described the battle against Myria nicely... and the epilogue, just like the game...
I liked too the few detalis you changed from the main story, i feel nostalgic...
I will play the game again, thanks to you, and great novelisation. I hope your next works will be as great as this one

ah yes! the chapter before the last chapter! doesn't feel great to be almost done with such a major project? hehe :) anyway, this chapter was really great. the group finally confronting myria and making her own up to her mistakes was really exciting. ^_^ i remember when i got to that part of the game and was like "ah ha! so that's what it was about!" the "mother goddess" trying to rid the world of the "evil dragons." i always viewed myria as eccentric at best in the third game. i always felt that she meant well, but took the protection thing muct too far. she was like an overprotective mother, eh? but in your story, where you take bits of tyr's personalty and put them onto myria, hehe, it works out just as great! you pulled off the crazy goddess just fine! you protrayed her as the type of goddess she really was, a childlike goddess that had grown to love the world that she had once thought of as a plaything. the fight scenes were awesome and the final blow that garr did with gaist's spear was really awesome! so, i am ready for the epilogue, miss Estrelita! ^_^

well... started reading this novelization... and so far as it goes i liked it quite a bit.
don't worry about idiots flaming it.. they're not worth your time ;)

the situations as you described them, made quite a lot of sense to me :)

waiting for the epilogue :D

great chapter, as always! i loved how to tied in earlier things with this chapter. fighting teepo always made me sad, but this chapter made me cry during those scenes! you put so much life into those scenes it was really moving. :) great job!