|Reviews for Naruto Gaiden: Rise of a Shinobi|
| Amconsequat 11/27/08 . chapter 26
Just to say something, fire may be the element most commonly attributed to dragons but dragons have been known to carry all elements so connecting fire and the dragon-signing contract would not be the most accurate thing.
| Amconsequat 11/27/08 . chapter 1
Actually a pretty good intro, I have been trying to find some other Naruto stories for me to read that seem to have a good base and I think I will be reading this for a while.
| Gravenimage 11/26/08 . chapter 26
Yeah another great chapter can't wait for the time skip update soon.
| chm01 11/26/08 . chapter 27
it was a good fic, looking foward to the sequel
| Gravenimage 11/26/08 . chapter 23
Great chapter I want to read more update soon.
| Jairo1 11/26/08 . chapter 22
although i thought it was a harem its okay by me if it stays a NarutoXSakura paring.
cant wait till sequal.
| Gravenimage 11/26/08 . chapter 22
Yes baby bring on the lemons I...mean that would be interesting update soon.
| OnGuard 11/26/08 . chapter 19
sorry, but i was hopeing that this was at least a small harem, but, it is not. i will never read your stories again.
| Mistress Persephone 11/25/08 . chapter 21
love your story! i was upset when i read the title the break up i was thinking that if naruto broke up with hinata then i would pissed beyond imaginable but that if hinat broke up with naruto then i wouldn't mind! how weird is that? well please update soon it's a really good story!
| Gravenimage 11/25/08 . chapter 21
Wow the story is getting better and Sasuke betray Konoha in a heartbeat well anyway at least and Sakura are together now good job.
| LonewolfBloodstorm 11/25/08 . chapter 18
i hate to say it, cause i like naruto and hinata, but for the sake of the story it might be better to have hinata die. i honestly cant see either of them cheating or anything like that.
| Gravenimage 11/25/08 . chapter 18
Another great chapter but its Jiraiya bot Jrya and I can't believe Hinata will tell him that I feel sorry why don't you pair her with Sasuke.
| Gravenimage 11/25/08 . chapter 16
Great chapter update soon.
| Gravenimage 11/25/08 . chapter 17
Great chapter update soon and yeah looks like Sakura feels attracted to Naruto I feel sorry for Hinata but she deserves someone better.
| Daemon Sadow 11/25/08 . chapter 17
That was... lacking. But you've been doing we otherwise.