Wow! This one chapter will be added to my favs. I love it! Dont know how else to describe what I feel. But Great Awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next update! (_)

Awesome! I love this. Ada being compared to a lioness huh? Interesting XD. Great Chapter!

Once again, you know how to pull off an Ada/Leon oneshot and story lol! Love this chap! Awesome!

Funnily enough, quite a few uncanny similarities in this chapter to one i have written for the next chapter of my story! spooky eh? lol, anyways, good effort, and your hard work is paying off as always. God bless Leon/Ada romance!

Crimson xx

Col, yet again good narrative from Ada's POV. Keep it up.

Crimson xx

Very nice, i like how you use the cannon as the setting for your one shots and use your own dialogue and directions for the chapter. It makes you a strong writer to not have to rely on the origional script and direction for effect. Looking forward to the rest.

Crimson xx

Awesome work once again, you should know by now im a HUGE fan of Leon/Ada fluff, and this set my heart on fire! Ada is onviouslt a very complexitive and complicated person when it comes to emotions, (only over Leon of course!) and you portrayed this wonderfully. Great job.

Crimson xx

Powerful stuff AK, i can really feel Williams desperatness and helplessness as he loses his humanity. Your writing is reminding me more and more of the brilliant efforts of the S.D. Perry series. Each character you take on and interpret brings a freshness to the story everyone is so familiar with. Well done!

Crimson xx

Lo-huh-huh-oving this story, i cant really think of much criticism, except maybe the oneshots could be slightly more chronological? Although that might not work for you, i only say this because it usually takes me a little while to realise which momentin RE2 you are referring to and it can be a tad confusing untill you get into it, although this isnt necessarily a bad thing! Good work as always...

Crimson xx

Okay, so it seems i have more time than ui thought i had on here lol. Anyhoo...

Amazing! Once again, you blow me away with your effortless charactisation and narrative. I can't beleive im sayin this, but i felt sorry for Anette in this chap, and i hated Anette in RE2, mainly cos she was a stupid -you-know-what- that got herself injured everytime she had a conversation and never shut up about being in love with a G virus mutated monster. But you actually warmed me to her with your narrative, very good work and very imaginative perspectives, keep it up!

Crimson xx

Wow... i was absolutely blown away by this. EXCELLENT characterisation, and considering Ben Bertolucci is a very small part in the RE franchise, you had even more work cut out for you. I have to say bravo on a very good job well done!

Im sorry i havent been able to keep up with your stories, but seeing as internet loveliness means having to have money, broadband and a laptop, im unable to keep up most of the time. So i PROMISE i will read more of these intriguing one shots and i will review each and every one! Keep up the very promising work...

Crimson xx

Aww man...that was great lol. Awesome job conveying Ada's emotions (again lol), and an equally awesome job in showing how she changed throughout the night.

I wish I could think of more to say, but you uploaded too much greatness in one day lol. Just know that it was excellent...I loved it, and you did a fantastic job.

Awesome. Just awesome. It was great how you incorporated Nicholai into the scenario. And I of course loved all of Ada's thoughts and feelings...well, I always do, but you know what I mean.

I can't wait to see how she changes!

Great stuff!

Yay! An update! And an interesting view into Ada's mind to boot. You know that I love figuring out how she thinks.

I also love how you showed her feelings progressively change. Well...hell, I loved it all! What's not to love?

Well darn! you just have to write such greatness huh XD

Loved this batch of updates. Truly great!