 Blackwing.Rose 2009-06-08 . chapter 6Aww, Kia, I loved these just as much as the last ones! My favourites were definitely 2, 3, 5, 6, 8 . . . Actually, you know what, I just loved them all. ;]
I love how you portray Ratchet and Rose; they're such a sweet, nervous, yet sexy couple. I love it. *grins* I can't wait to see more of the Hatchet/Rose twins and their relationship growing in "Not Some Wishful Thought". Rad's piece in "Awkward" was very funny - if Starscream finds out about that, he's toast . . . I also really loved "Sea", with Jade and Rose on the beach, and "Friends" (I think that was probably my favourite, actually - I love Ratchet and Ironhide having little 'man moments', lol ;P).
Looking forward to more of your work, love! Update soon or I'll hunt you down and eat you :]
Rose x |
 black dragon 2009-06-01 . chapter 6wow this is highly amusing |
 Keeper101 2009-05-25 . chapter 5Wow I love this book. You did a great job on this amd I espestionally loved it when the girls went swimming. That was so funny. I'm still cracking up. Update soon
From Keeper101 |
 Ninjalala 2009-04-18 . chapter 5It's been a long while since you have updated any of your TF stories, my dear!
I didn't think the 20 Drabble chapter wasn't at all OOC, I thought it was rather lovely, hon'! I was sad when I read the one about Leiana dying to protect her friends! Poor Sunstreaker! And I really liked the Kia/Ironhide slow dance; she does have a man she does like!
And the dressing room drabble... *blushes deeply* Sunny! You pervy bastard!
These drabbles were very entertaining, emotional, and funny, Kia, and I do hope you do more of these if you get the chance.
A very well done on this chapter, my dear! and I do hope to see more of these oneshots!
Ninjalala x |
 Blackwing.Rose 2009-04-18 . chapter 5. . . Kia, UPDATE YOUR STORY. Like, NOW.
*takes a few deep breaths*
Omg, I am so excited after reading this. The parts with Ratchet and Rose literally had me shivering -- seriously, I have goosebumps, especially at #2. And when she finds out she's pregnant . . . and the death scene . . . and that adorable dance scene . . . God, loved it. Absolutely loved it. I can't wait to see this written out in full, which I really hope you intend to do.
The other pairings tugged on my heartstrings, too . . . Damn, Leiana's death had tears in my eyes, too. And Alie and Sideswipe -- your take on them is great. The little scene with Ratchet and Kia really hit me hard, too. Damn, so few words, and you got all these emotions out of me!
MOAR PLEASE.
*ehem* I mean, update (really) soon. Please? |
 Blackwing.Rose 2008-12-24 . chapter 3Sorry, love, I meant to review this earlier but didn't have any time ><
Anyway, thank you so much for doing this for me! It was really sweet of you :) I felt so sorry for Rose when she thought everyone had forgotten - especially when Kia just offered her a cough sweet when she tried to remind them! The little scene with Barricade was very chilling, too... I wonder why he left her alone? I doubt the Decepticon gives a damn that it's her birthday, but I'm glad he did. I loved Rose's interaction with Ratchet (squee!) and Mikaela, too, and the birthday cake part at the end.
Thanks so much again! (hugs) |
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