 Artistic-Nerd 2009-10-08 . chapter 2I am going to say this first and foremost. you had better keep writing this because I want to draw fanfic-art of it! I love the way that you have portrayed the characters personalities. As I was reading this I just kept thinking to myself "that is totally how _ would act." I'm attached to Kenny right now - (he's such a perv) - and I humbly suggest that there is some Bunny later on in this fanfic. good job and keep it up! I look forward to more chapters! |
 Imajinacion Reinbou 2009-10-04 . chapter 2I don't know what it was, but for the past few days, I had the sudden urge to reread this. So I did.
I still love it so far, and I know it's something I could get emotionally invested into if it was continued. In short, I can't wait for an update. :)
I also just realized I never reviewed this story until now... Gah. Sorry. |
 SuggestionGirl 2009-05-14 . chapter 2wow. Just wow. are you still working on this? You should. it is amazing :) |
 Saph Rose 2009-04-24 . chapter 2Gah, I love Cartman/Kyle. Srsleh. Even if they don't end up together in the end it's still fun to read. Because of all the cutesy moments they share without it being OOC.
ARGH!!
I'm going to die waiting for updates! I'm not even kidding, when I read something I really like every day without a new chapter feels like waiting 3 weeks for Nintendo Wii to come out. D:
LOL@Kyle sleeping on the floor like a **. xD |
 PrincessDesire 2009-03-10 . chapter 2Very sweet. First loves really are the most special aren't they? Well, I look forward to seeing where this goes and hope that you update soon. |
 Natsu 2008-12-24 . chapter 2 The Cartman/Kyle is awesome! Please write it forever.
I love the edginess of the C/K pairing. Style can get a little wishy washy for me but with Cartman and Kyle there's always so much spark!
Am interested to see where this goes! Please continue soon! (and please let Cartman win mkaythanks) |
 The Brat Prince 2008-12-10 . chapter 2That chapter was made of win. You're my hero. |
 Mememe 2008-12-10 . chapter 2 Oh wow. Kyle is in a really difficult position right now. I'm getting really into this story... so amazing so amazing. |
 kaybeexx 2008-12-10 . chapter 2OH GOD. Why is this SO good? Ya know, I'm one of those people who positively hates Cartman/Kyle. I mean seriously resent it. But this is gold so far! It might just be the way you write, but I don't think I'm gonna be as iffy with this paring anymore. Keep it going :> I love it~
But I am wondering about what's going to happen with Stan and Kyle. That should be interesting.
And I ADORE you for mentioning Hershey, PA in this! I go to Hershey Park every summer :> I love it there! |
 apie 2008-12-10 . chapter 2wahh, this chapter really made me hope it ends stanXkyle...we'll see tho, ya? |
 The-Icon-Girl 2008-12-10 . chapter 2Hahaha, the end made me laugh uncontrollably!
I am so much in love with this story. Can I have your permission to marry it? LOL.
Thanks for writing such a masterpiece!! |
 Enigmus 2008-12-10 . chapter 2This story is AMAZING! |
 Smackee 2008-12-10 . chapter 2I am loving this! The way you potray Kyle and Cartmans relationship feels very 'them'. Although I really do understand Kyle's feelings for Stan...this is just heartbreaking! I'm interested in knowing what happened to him in Florida, got a goth boyfriend? I'm usually a c/k fan, but I'm siding with Stan this time so far. Either way, I am intersted in how the plot develops and what is revealed first. |
 Chiraru 2008-12-10 . chapter 2Thank you for using Raven! No one uses him and he's such a great character! This seems like an awesome story already, can't wait for the third chapter! |
 theartistformerlyknownas 2008-12-10 . chapter 2I know I may be kind of missing the point, but I'm totally freaking rooting for Kyle/Cartman at this point. (Favorite couple=weak spot). But dude, this is awesome. I'm so curious about what happened to Stan in Florida. And who is this Aaron fellow? I'm completely intrigued, and I can't freaking WAIT for the next update. So much love for you right now. ♥ |