Ness.

Big ouchy! heehee lovely. bev xx

OMG, perfect! That would be a big OOPS!

LOL

AW hun, this fic was awesome!

omg...just like a brother too haha

loved it hun!

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One word: OUTCH!*Whips out the First Aid Kit
I volunteer to play nurse!

Oops, it sounds like one of the boys has just landed a punch to the other, square on the nose! Looks like one of them wasn't as alert as he should have been and the other was a little too alert!

Great atmosphere, great use of the senses. And I like the double twist, of stillness to THWACK! in the nose to Whoops...

*chuckles* I like it. Very good descriptive beginning, gets you on the edge of your seat. Then the "Shit! Sorry, dude!" ending. Good one.

Oh ow. You broke someone's nose. Which is OK of course 'cause its only a fic. Phew. Nice job on this one!

Phoebe

Once again your flair for description causes me to sit up in awe.I nearly choked on those cobwebs and my tears are watering with the pain. One hundred weeny words and the picture is clear in my head (well...except for which brother but hey, I'm happy to play your movie with both, each version just as wonderful!) Great work Ness, you are a legend.

LOL sounds like Dean's getting the poker in the face hehe.
Sam sounds like such a nut. "Shit! Sorry, dude!" That's seriously all you can say? LMAO. HOT POKER

Vanessa! Totally dug this! And I love your swear word!
Cool.

Blair

I'm sorry to say, by I snorted when I read this. I thought it was funny. I don't know if you intended that and if not, I apologize, but I loved it. Hugs, Vonnie

realy good.)

Ow... I'm imagining a 2x4, but hopefully it's just a punch. Love the apology, heartfelt, but in Winchester speak!

Haha! Now, the question is, who hit who? Poor guy!