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Jamzz 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Blaise, you are one heck of a writer. You amaze me. You should be a writer. And sell books. THAT WAS ONE GREAT STORY! WRITE THE NEXT ONE AND HURRY. I hate cliff-hangers.
Kate S 7/21/00 . chapter 1
This is a great fic! Write more quick!
WolfieTwin1 7/21/00 . chapter 1
You captured his pride and bitterness perfectly... Wanting to see the Dark Mark over the Ministry, thinking his second place was "favoritism(that's so typical), and of course, all of the initiation scene... Mr Perfect Werewolf, hee hee... I still kind of wonder why he's so bitter, but maybe there's nothing you can really point to as an explanation... Hope to see more, anyway.
Nemo 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Outstanding as usual. Glad you enjoyed your holiday. Great story. Nemo.
Katie Bell 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Love this piece. You've got Snape down so well! And I could just see the books flying through the castle. You better finish this before you go!
Aziraphale 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Yea! You're back! This story is as great as all your others! Do you ever spend any time at home?
netshark 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Ah...Blaise is back! _ This story is just perfect so far, though I do have a small nitpick you used the word fear three times in the first paragraph, and it sounded rather clumsy read and I hope you continue it soon. _
maria 7/21/00 . chapter 1
That was Good! write more !
MaryR 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Wahoo! You're back! And with a great new story, too. Can hardly wait for the next part.
Hermione Williams 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Very good! You write about how Snape felt when he became a death eater very well. This is well written. Also very interesting. Please write part II soon!
Quaxo 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Chicka, this RULES! *screams happily* This is very close to Snape's true character I feel, if not really his character!
CLS 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Fabulously chilling! The initiation scene was...must work on having sufficient words to describe it. Snape's proud demeanor is lovely; you characterize him better than anyone else. Hippolyte...hmmmm. She is VERY interesting. I laughed a lot about the textbooks and "Mr. Perfect Werewolf"! More detailed review later as I will want to read it again, and again, and again. Write fast!
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