Great fanfiction, now i just wish you would update!

I have no idea how you can come up with such gigantic leaps in character development and still keep it all plausible.

This is something new.

Possibly the best stand alone Evangelion ive read yet. i dont consider shinji and shinju to be the same 'person' but its any changes are an understandable reaction to dying and being flash cloned in a strange new body. there NOT the same person, mearly a continuation of the soul. dont know why thats a big distinction, im primaraly a ranma reader, so being trapped in a foriegn form isnt even remotly new to me, guess it just makes it more beleivable. you did a great job of transitioning everything, and i can see plots in your subplots, its getting to be a very dramatic and turbulent story. please continue. ciao

...Wow. The level of thought you put into the military aspects of Eva combat (and Azazel on top of it) is astounding! And as for Shinju... well. I came here from TV Tropes and was told to expect "a very major twist on Shinji's life", but... wow! The most amazing part of that is the portrayal of her as, simultaneously, a true-to-life (as far as I can tell) preteen girl and more hardcore than the original ever was!

I have to say I love this story and I am suprised that I do. I normaly not to happy with 'Girl shinji' stories, especialy ones like this where he suddenly acts really girly, to the point of even possibly liking guys but the rest of the story was to good for such a minor point to really get to me. First off this story is a lot more realistic then most fics or even canon. Nerv is a joke and people caught onto that fact and actualy strived to fix it, simply things like having no effective weapons was the biggest joke. At start the series the only weapon that really worked Nerv had was the knife, and at the end the series it was still the knife. Considering they had a working EVA basicaly since it absorbed Yui that is a total lack of progress in the decade or so Gendo ran the place.

Things like the HALO drops are just cool to in this story and I can't wait for an update.

Oh, gods, I love this fic.

Interesting to see the 'Rei effect' applied to the other two, most definitely (hmm, writing a review without spoilers is hard!)...

It took me a minute to realise it, but Rei's biological relationship to Shinji hasn't actually changed... she's still his sister/mother.

I've really enjoyed this piece, and am impressed with your attention to detail when it comes to military detail- I wonder, where do you get this info? I'm also impressed of how much believable conspiracy you've been able to integrate into the story, and how you've been able to make the characters believable.

An interesting take on Eva, I quite like it. I'm especially fond of putting the jump troop songs in; they work quite well.

I like reading about Shinju. Shinju is probably the most interesting thing in this fic. :3

hehehehehehehe.

I should have found this story sooner. ;) Knowing who made it!!

lol

Catch up time. :D I am so excited to read morez!! Hurah!

Well, I've thoroughly enjoyed this fiction thus far. I was initially expecting a typical genderbender story, but have been pleasantly surprised to see it as more of a "what if?" type scenario.

Overall, there is very little for me to critique. You've obviously done your research and taken your time to put it all together.

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. If anything, I'm hoping to see more development in Shinju's identity crisis... or rather, the lack thereof thus far. Unless that is a plot point you plan to bring up later. Shinju feels very, very different from Shinji, and while some of that is easily explained through the alteration of events, I'm looking forward to seeing more on why this is the case.

What an awesome gender bending EVA fic. I'm definitely looking forward to this one!

This story has no soul.

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Great chapter for a great story!

Also, noticed that the names of the US Navy officers were . . .rather familiar. Believe that those names were rather big in the atomic science field, if I don't miss my guess (ala played a BIG part in producing the atomic bomb).

Nice inside joke if that's the case!