Hehehehe :) Oh That was awesome ^^ Loved the chapter
I'm Great XD How are you old friend?? :P Gosh Keegan is such a flirt lol x

Oh I love this chap :) Sorry its been so long since i reviewed lol x

Ha, Ryuk never seems to learn about pie. Pie is good. But sometimes it can be your worst enemy. Great chapter, lookin forward to some more extra's and another chapter for Origins! :D

Man this story is just so great i HAD to read it again :D I love all the parts of it and i just love it so much!

;P I had 2 fave it ne XP I read it earlier...'member, it's me- Gabby ;P

Awesome!

*sniffle* now i miss L :( *is very, very sorry that she can't work on Ryuuk's profile page thingy because her computer doesn't like photoshop*

Aw gosh I love this story (: Thx for the extra chapters XD

oxoxo

It would be funny is Keegan did bring back L back to life, and both (or just L) decide to pay a visit to Light in Prison.
Light would go crazy again, and it would be funny as hell.
He's be like "DAMN YOU KURO!", then she walks in and says "Yes? you called me?"

What if somehow Light escaped and got a hold of another Death Note? I mean with Keegan resurrecting him with the Life Script, he can't be killed by the Death Note, so it might be harder stop him, but w/e, that was just a random though that i had after reading this story.

1 chapter could be Keegan taking Ryuk to the Apple Orchard she promised him.
He would go crazy when he sees it.


I thought i'd just throw my comment here.
Story was good though, look forward to more extra chapters.

Hehe, Keegan pwned ._. Bringing L back would be cliché, but L rocks o_o Ahh well, keep updating!

OMG I love this story so much!
Must... continue... reading!
@_@
lol I don't think I'll get much sleep tonight.

Aw! It was very cute. I'm loving the extra chapters. c:

You are really creative into thinking something over like this. I have never read any story with the character pairing up with Ryuk. So you made my first story a one to remember, thank you.
At some points I could see that Ryuk was a little OOC but all in all, it was a great story.
It was funny how in your story how Light totally lost it and didn't really get anywhere.So I had some laughs.

Hahah that was great.

Visiting Joe in Prison, never would have guessed that.
Death by raped in the ass, i lmao at the thought.

Eating 50 Pie's in the pie eating contest. Damn. He is a Botomless pit, heheh.

These extra chapters are very amusing. You should keep them coming or make some sort of sequel of the aftermath AFTER she beat light.


What if Light somehow escaped prison (if he wasn't executed) and got ANOTHER death note somehow.
After his name already written in the life script, he can't be killed by the death note so it might be a little more challenging and interesting.

Aw, iilovedit xx (: