Aw, that's depressing. Good, but depressing. Now I need to find some way to cheer myself up... Do you think it's sort of pathetic to be unable to think of anything that would cheer yourself up? :D

No, wait. Laughing at myself works. Ahaha.

Anyway, I'm a little off track. Great one shot. Yes, a little OOC, but since you acknowledged it, it was clearly on purpose, and done only to add the the story. Besides, that's one of the best things about fanfiction: there aren't any limits (well, not for the most part). It's all about interpretation.

So sad!! But still beautiful! Really good job :)

That was really good. I liked the ending... But I was very sad at it. [Sounds like I'm throwing my sadness at things, ahehe.]
I agree, this one was a little harder than Psychoshipping, hm..
Fantastic work.