This is a really cool story! Haven't read anything like it! Good luck!

Sarah

nice i liked it. i feel bad for j. jenks not his fault jasper is so mean to him. please update

Good story. I almost...almost feel sorry for J. Jenks.

Wow, that was incredible.

I'm speechless.

Sort of horror-ish, loved it.

Awesome lines. "The one who would make my death much slower and more painful than the man standing in front of me at the time.”

Oh, and, "his touch was as cold as death". Um, wow.

This is a really great story. I love the background that you're supplying, it fits well. I hope that you write more chapters!

Creepy.

Jasper 'fell of the wagon'. I suppose?

ahhaha, maria...is she really the same maria jasper knew?

This story is awesome so far! I always kind of wondered, along with Bella, why J was so scared of Jasper. I'm glad we're finally finding out.

Also, I love how unique this is. I don't think I've ever seen a fanfic from Jenk's pov, so this is a worthwhile first. Keep writing!

hopesallthings

Haha! Amazing story! I love how Jasper is to Jenks and the line he muttered at the end, LMAO!

I love it! I always love reading from minor character's points of view, and this is certainly no expection.

Your writing is lovely - I thoroughly enjoy your style. J is characterised very well, and just as I had imagined him. Are you going to write about what happens when J meets Bella? I really would like to hear that. Just to see the contrast. But I'll let you carry on for mow with Jazzy - I love him. :) I love tham all! :D lol

I really can't wait to read the rest.

Regards

Lemon

You are so funny! That was great!

I love how you're portraying Jasper & , especially Jasper's comment about the secretary Maria.

Haha. Hahahaha. I... wow. Yay! I'm glad you're updating here. This was amazing. Love it, love the way Mr. Jasper terrifies Jenks. I actually want to run back and see the Jenks Bella interraction. And I totally would go grab my Breaking Dawn book if I didn't have class shortly. Love his reaction to a random secretary named Maria. Absolutely lovely, and typical of Jasper. Love it!

Once again- you are writing an EXCELLENT story!

-giggles-

I love Jasper. Honestly.

I guess update soon!

-Maggie