Wow, this is so amazing. I like how scary you make Jasper, J is terrified of him. Poor guy, I wonder if he ever stops thinking about Jasper and his murder family.

And how he can't really know what Bella is thinking, because she is acting friendly but still reminds him of Jasper :P

And the last part was also genious, they needed some kind of finish. Maybe J will be able to sleep through the night now that he won't have to see Jasper every now and then P

Really, really great story, it's the only fic I've read that is about J. Jenks. And, I'd bet, the best fic about J that I'll ever read, too. Keep up the good work!

this is really really good, i love it. amazing.

awesome

I like how Jenks thinks Jasper is scary! Good job with the scary-ness!

is it over? it seems to be but it's really good so i want it to continue!

emmettsmyfave

Thank you for keeping J from having a coronary. And Renesmee's random spurt of wisdom was adorable.

This was very good, very well thought out. And very funny:

"He smiled widely at my shock. I’d long ago given up trying to hide my emotions from him. No matter how good my poker-face, he always saw through it."

I laughed for ages at that. xD

i really liked this. I always wondered about Jenks.

i agree with Jenks...and Jasper...Bella is the strongest dangerous creature because besides her shield, i think there is more to her power than just a protection shield.

Brilliant. Utterly and completely brilliant. Great work, very much in character for all involved, great insight into the small 'side character' of Jenks, Cullen family interaction that reads real and plausible and not too fluffy. Just great. Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it immensely.

This is a really impressive work. Its engaging and I love the way you develop Jenk's character. Best of all it fits in effortlessly with Breaking Dawn. Quite easily the best piece of fan fiction I have ever read. Well done.

wow - that is an amazing story - I love it :D

thanks so much for sharing

Hello Eowyn77

Excelent story! My favorite is the chapter 2! I also wondered what happened in Calgary after what Edward said in Midnight Sun... but I didn't think that Jasper was in it! I thought that was only Maria's business... so do you think that Jasper "cheated" the vegetary diet, convinced by Maria? That he couldn't resist the temptation if Maria forced him? How Alice would have felt about it? Sorry, now I have too many questions! :-D Nice touch with the name of the secretary, by the way!

Sorry, what is the "Kubarev" thing? Is it a real thing or you made it up?

You got the characters, Jasper, Bella and "J" perfectly!

Kalea

I love the fear that J feels from Jasper. It is amazing.

Theres going to be more of this story, isn't there? I love it! I've always liked Jenks. Please, Please, Please, PLEASE update soon! It's brilliant!