 TeamTHEFT 2009-08-06 . chapter 4this is soo good. plz update fast! |
 Kakashifangirlnumber1000 2009-06-21 . chapter 4Great story and great chapter.Please update soon again. |
 Evil-lil-angel-08 2009-05-15 . chapter 4lol kakashi giggling! |
 Tranquil Girl 2009-04-25 . chapter 4Like this story.. Intresting. : D |
 Juniper11 2009-04-19 . chapter 4I feel so slow. 'Through Time' is the name of this story. I just realized that we're going to be seeing Sakura grow in age and maturity. I can't believe that is just hitting me now. (Smacks forehead.)
Anyway, on to Sasuke. MAIN WIFE? WHAT THE HECK IS HE SMOKING? Sakura must have really loved him because I would have looked at him and the only thoughts that would have went through my head are MURDER DEATH KILL. But it was a life lesson and I bet she won't get into another relationship when she knows her love won't be returned.
Oh, and Kakashi's line at the end. Well, Kakashi wasn't the only one giggling.
Thanks for the update! I look forward to the next. |
 roxnroll 2009-04-19 . chapter 4I loved your take on how Sasuke would go about reviving his clan. How nice of him to make her his main wife. That was such a slap in the face to her.
Once again, you've written a story that has me rivited. Can't wait to read more. So glad that you're back.
Rox |
 Eldr-Fire 2009-04-19 . chapter 4Taking a different outcome of the story is interesting, and I think you are making interesting things happen. However, I would suggest making the narration more... hmm. Right now it is just very simple, which is a good thing in that it's not confusing, but I would encourage you to try and make it a little more complex. Expanding the vocabulary would really help to enrich the narrative-- not digging things out of a thesaurus, of course, but rather just working to make the story a little more compelling. Right now with the plentiful dialogue but minimalist description in the narrative, the story is clear but could definitely be artistically expanded...
... if that makes any sense!
Eldr |
 shkh4ever 2009-04-19 . chapter 4Thank you for the new chapter. Sasuke was spot on. Good job writing him. The story line for Sakura is good, most authors send her to Suna. Love Kakashi as always. Until next time. |
 Enchantress10 2009-04-19 . chapter 4I did nearly forget about this story. I am glad You(the author) didn't.
Sasuke is an **, but at least and honest **. I wish him many mediocre(sp?) children.
I hope Sakura will come back soon. She is now 17, pleast don't bring her back when she is like 24 or something. I mean how long can such a mission be? Maybe 3-4 years? Sakura would be 21 it could be perfect.
There are many stories out there where Sakura is 24 and Kakashi 38 when they come together. Is it a standart or a rule or something, I don't know about? |
 ClumsyKlutzBella 2009-04-19 . chapter 4Oh my ... Sakura has a lot more to grow. She's not as mature as she is in your other stories, which is hopefully the only reason, why she still love little emo sasuke. Hopefully this long, long mission will make her growm a lot, so that she will make kakashi's heart beat faster. I'm already looking forward to your next chapter ;) |
 KakashiKrazed 2009-04-18 . chapter 4I absolutely adored the power play between Kakashi and the elders...it smacked of their arrogance, and Kakashi's self control...after all, he didn't chidori them, did he!?!
heh - meanwhile-Sasuke showed just how far he's sank-and Kakashi's comment about how only mediocre women would agree to his plan to reseed the Uchiha clan was perfect.
The elders' plan to send Sakura to the Raikage was a surprise...but your explanation suited the situation-and the irony that she is being sent away to make up for Sasuke's actions with the 8-tails was well done...
And of course the best had to be the very end...when Kakashi giggled while indulging in Junko's adventures to pass time until love finds him...heh
Loved it!
Looking forward to more...
'Krazed |
 Eldr-Fire 2009-03-16 . chapter 3Good job. :) It was a nice chapter.
Eldr |
 LadyInverness 2009-03-15 . chapter 3I've missed your writing! Glad to have you back! :)
I like that you're still exploring Sasuke and Sakura's relationship before it turns KakaSaku.
Congratulations on becoming a mum. All the best! |
 roxnroll 2009-03-15 . chapter 3I'm thinking that you need to take the manga over. I'm really loving what you've done here. I was actually tearing up at the end with Sasu/Saku. I'm so glad that you are back. I've missed your fics.
Congrats on joining the mom club!! I look forward to reading more.
Rox |
 ShipperTrish 2009-03-15 . chapter 3Congratulations on the baby! That's so awesome that you're a mom now! Hey, maybe you can turn your real life experiences as a mom into a fanfic with Sakura as a new mom and Kakashi as a new dad. I have a one track mind, don't I? :P
Anyway, I'm still loving your version of events much better, and who knows? It's not too late. All this may still happen yet.
Good job and congrats again on the new baby! ^_^ |