Hey!! Why have you not updated this story yet?? It seems as if Derek is getting protective of Sarah (& maybe not liking or knowing it) Plus, just how did this Carlos find them out of the blue? What effect will this have on Sarah? See you've left questions that need to be answered. Please don't let this story sit unfinished.

Hey, it's not very nice to leave the story unfinished like this. You have to get on the next chapter.

Could you please REVIEW? it's a very good story!

Awesome story.