Alrighty *rubs hands together* So, great idea here. Really liked it.

So...as much as I'm one of those BA/fluffy/pathetic shipper, I can't believe I'm about to say this but I actually liked the 1st ending better. Weird, right, since I love my rated M stuff? I guess I've just never been one for Bobby and Alex to have their first time anywhere either than either his or hers apartment. *Shrugs shoulders* Call me old fashion...or something.

I think some of the other reasons is because I liked some of the lines more in the 1st version as well...and how Bobby seemed shy and uncertain at first. Especially when it gets to around this part
Seeing tears starting to form in her eyes, Bobby stops. What the hell am I doing? This is Alex...Eames. My partner."I...I'm sorry." Bobby stammers as he removes his hands from her. She grabs his hands and holds them tightly."Bobby...I...I don't want you to stop but...I'm afraid," she confesses.

Turning her around to face him, he holds her face in his hands and wipes the tears away. "It's okay," he tries to reassure her. "Do you know how beautiful you are? How much I want you?" He pulls her to him and holds her as she lays her head against his chest. "I am with you. I hold you. Nothing will happen to you. I would never hurt you. I won’t do anything you don’t want…"Yes" Alex breathes against him. "But I have to know this isn't a one time thing for you, Bobby. I can't do this just once. Not with you."Never Alex. I would never use you like that. You are too important for me. I…I love you." Bobby whispers. How could she think I would treat her like that?

Alex looks up to see the hurt in Bobby's eyes. "I want you so much Bobby, but I have to protect myself from too much pain. I don't know how I am going to survive if I lose someone again. How am I going to survive losing you?
She wraps her arms around him and holds him tightly. Her hard nipples press against his soft wool sweater and she can feel his erection pressing against her belly."I would never leave you, Alex. Please believe me…Come on, let’s get you dressed and get out of here. I think we should finish this conversation somewhere more...private.
Great job with them all though.

Snyder

This is by far the best version for ending this story. The first one is quite romantic, the second leaves me wanting more(has many good parts though) but the third is absolutely HOT! Although I can also imagine a combination of the three. This is a story worth of a sequel. Very good work.

Wow, so this is part 3, m! I like all three endings, when I re-read each one I decide it is my favorite lol! Ending 3 might have a slight edge though."Her climax hits Alex hard and as he gazes her eyes, his whole world suddenly consists of nothing but his best friend and the heat between them.
That's so delicious! A wonderful story, so what's next?)

i think i like 1,3,2. really good though.

hey

oh du hastest recht
das is besser

freu mich schon auf deine neue geschichte

lg sannie

Whoa, you pulled out all the stops!"They barely touched each other because each time they did, it only served to frustrate them more. great line! We can only wish it's so true!"Alex pants as she feels her pulse quicken and she can feel Bobby completely inside her. O.M.G."Sex is so much better, when you…love your partner. perfect!

Excellent job! I liked all three so much because they sort of build on one another. But, if I had to vote, I'd be with you, 3,1,2.

Great Story! Nice and fluffy and smutty!

i loved this!

hey
ich mag das ende, is verrucht

freu mich schon auf das andere ende

lg wasu

This is a delicious chapter! I was only disappointed with the words The End at the bottom NO! Please, say that's not true. I'm hoping this can be a continuing series.
I love so much of it, one of my fave sentences ends with..."every finger over one rib." That image alone knocks my socks off!
I can't wait for more!

Woohoo! Things are really heating up in that dressing room!"You don't have ask for this. so sweet! I also liked how he thought he would stop in a second if she wanted him to. Pure Bobby."I don't want to shop anymore…let’s go home do something that doesn’t involve any clothes. great line!
Wow I can only imagine ending #3! That thing must be steamy!

hey

na endlich haben sie sich wirklich gefunden

echt gutes ende

hoffe du schreibst bold etwas neues

freu mich schon drauf

lg wasu

I really love this story, and am looking forward to more. I love your way with words. I hope there is more soon.)

i loved that

Alex seemed to have control over the situation until the point where he saw her half naked and he touched her. That must have been some very nice touching. Of course Bobby would never see her as a one-time thing. Alex would have seen through it. Both of them melt for each other. Alex wouldn't be close to tears otherwise. Love hurts. But no dusky pink corset during the lovemaking? Maybe on a special occassion. Anniversarry or something. That would make an awesome story.(I can imagine it. "The dusky pink corset series" or "Dusky pink nights" or "Nights wrapped in dusky pink". What do you think?
I am so going to be having dreams about all this.

Oh, that was so wonderfully sweet and sexy all at the same time!

I loved Alex's thought process, and that she ended up letting Bobby in on it. I also like how she started thinking about the "office rumors" right at that point. How she knew they must have been true and wanted him because of it. And it was right to make her wonder if she was just another conquest, but we all know she isn't.

Great job on this version of chapter 5!