 PiixiieDust 2009-11-19 . chapter 1Ok, so I just finished watching the Red John episode where the idiot Rebecca girl get's killed and kills Bosco? The one just aired today?
Yeah, after that I needed a cute little Patrick Jane moment and this was perfect. ^.^ I applaud your efforts and accomplishments at keeping Jane perfectly in character considering how impossible he is to predict. Great job, xD
Next time, maybe add a touch more of description but it really was an amazing fic. Keep up the great work. ^.^
~Piixiie~ |
 Viktorija 2009-07-20 . chapter 1I liked it:) |
 Americanchick 2009-07-20 . chapter 1I like this. ^_^
*Alyssa |
 Sarafina Knowles 2009-06-24 . chapter 1This was a really cute idea, nice job. I adore how you portrayed Patrick so well. Very simple and sweet! |
 griffin-girl02 2009-03-11 . chapter 1This is great! I think the conversation between Jane and Amanda moved a little quicker than a normal conversation would, but other wise it was very well written. Gotta love Jane, haha. |
 Jedi Knight Cheeze 2008-12-18 . chapter 1That was good!
You've done a great job of writing Mr. Jane's character. :) |
 Farrahmack 2008-12-11 . chapter 1Patrick is so awesome he is good at charming also :) |
 Ellipsis9 2008-12-07 . chapter 1Great characterization of Patrick Jane. Your writing was both concise to keep my focus but detailed enough to make it enjoyable. Great job. Can't wait to read more from you, I'll have to see what other stories you've posted. =) |
 ForevermoreNevermore 2008-12-06 . chapter 1Oh, how cyute! I loved it! |
 Lyssa 2008-12-01 . chapter 1 It's a good story, captures Jane's essence pretty well. Although, I thought his phone had no signal; how did he recieve a call from Lisbon if he had no signal? Just thought I'd mention it. Good job. ^_^ |
 TemporalBONES 2008-11-30 . chapter 1Totally in character! Oh, and funny AND sweet too.
Great job :) |
 Amber Cloud 2008-11-30 . chapter 1Cute. Makes me want more though.
Have any others running through your skull? |
 bulletproofweeks 2008-11-26 . chapter 1Very cute. It really made me smile! |
 DNAisUnique 2008-11-25 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this! It's an excellent show and you did a nice job keeping Jane (and Lisbon) in character. Oh to be stuck on an elevator with Simon Baker...er, I mean, Patrick Jane. :) Nice work. |
 MJ Butterflies 2008-11-25 . chapter 1This was a very well written fic! The show is awesome! |