Really sexy and nicely written, even the non-sex parts were entertaining because those arguments so totally just seemed like them. I have to admit the ending was a little bit of a surprise to me, and it made me smile. And I have to admit that Sheryl being all submissive was kinda sexy, so I liked that too. I would imagine it doesn't happen very often XDD

this is hot and funny as hell. lol

i wish you write more stories of them

this is one of my fav

XD That was surprisingly cute.

Hot ;)

I enjoyed this fiction. You wrote both of them exactly as I pictured - teasing Sheryl, a whipped Alto, playful banter, and a power struggle for the top spot (don't mind the pun). Actually, Sheryl 'gave up' pretty easily... think she did that on purpose :P

I definitely would love a second chapter!

The playful banter between them makes all your fics gems.

This one was so lol and ... cute :o!

Smex!

Wow! I'm actually not allowed to read this since I haven't reach that age... But really, nice story

Sheryl's drive is insatiable. The little power struggle between her and Alto was wonderfully pictured, which made me feel a little sorry for Alto until he finally had the reins.

Great story as usual. :)

STESHHY! I already said it, but this is absolutely a gem. A very beautiful one too! Thank you so much for writing this. I'm sure a lot of people will appreciate and love this as much as I do. :)

Arusheri eien!