Very beautiful

This is lovely. :)

I can't really give any constructive criticism, as my song writing skills are rather lacking, but I love this.

Well done. I would have review sooner, but I only just finished Heir to Sevenwaters.

Is there any way to receive an alert when a new JM story is added?

I have no idea who Juliet Marillier is, but this is pretty just the same. :) Some of your rhymes are a bit stretched, such as "star" and "arms", but that's alright. I still liked it.