stoked about the next chapter!
update soon please!

-Luna Carter

I like the story.

yay looks like tim might be getting it together update soon

Great story. I love Yule, everyone should have a friend like that. And Tiffany...Next please. And God, do I hate Lyla. Sorry to all Layla lovers there, but could she just please make up her mind already?

love it! so i'm assuming tim asks jennsen for help etc etc.
is there some sort of health issue with her mom?
please update soon!

tim friends with a girl...tis shocking, but always nice. :) good job!

Great chapter...you really wrote everyone in character well...especially Landry!

“You know what, I consider that particularly offensive.” Landry began in that mature, conversational tone that no one took seriously. “I understand that you're obviously falling into that jock-like masculine persona, but there's no need to–”

That line just goes to show how in character your characters are ;D

I can't wait to see what happens in the next one, and reading the chapter again, you've got me wondering if there is going to be any development of the 'Powderpuff' football games...

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!

very nice. i like it. update soon pls!

Another awesome chapter :D Loved Tim's POV this time around, and love the relationship developing between him and Jennsen. And I too hope we see lots of the Riggins brothers in S4 - they're just hilarious together :D Keep up the great work - hope to see another update soon!!

I hope Jennsen starts helping Tim, they're cute together

i'm liking it,waiting for more...

i like it. update soon pls.

So very glad to see an update from you! And this chapter was well worth the wait - loved it :D I loved their interaction in this chapter - more civil but still that underlying sarcasm, and of course there's the chemistry. You write Tim perfectly. As for where the story's headed - I don't have a clue, but I'm sure whatever you write will be brilliant :D
Keep up the great job! And hopefully update soon!