This story is really really good. I love the way it fit together, it was very very nice. I sat at my computer for 8 hours reading this xD
I will have to go read the sequel now
i hope its as good as this one is

You made me cry...

Wow, what a nasty cliff hanger. Good thing that I've just started this story, and can just go to the next chapter. :)

That was the most beautiful story I've ever read. Bravo. I'm close to tears of joy right now. I can't wait to start on the sequel! Thanks so much for the wonderful experience!

I just read this one AGAIN and am teary-eyed now. Your stories are really addictive, and I can only hope you keep on writing and give us more wonderful tales to enjpy. It's unbelievable that this is your first posted work.

To whom it may concern: This is a wonderful story! Read it.

this is an amazing story!
I loved it!

Your story is simply amazing! It's so wonderful... emotional... and very well thought out!

Lovly

I love

I happened across this by accident, when I found the sequel, and was immediately hooked. It seemed a little sketchy at first, but around chapter three I couldn't stop. Ended up staying up three hours later than I expected to... Oops.

A few mistakes I caught: You mix up "then" and "than" a lot, and I'm not 100% sure that you used commas properly, it felt like you added some for good measure, when they weren't needed. I can't pick out every time that you mixed up "then" and "than," but here's a way to keep them straight while you're going back through the story: Than is used in comparison (IE: She is better than him.), and Then is used for just about everything else. I doesn't work all the time, but it will be right about 99% of the time.

Overall I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It strings you along from beginning to end, and you've done a wonderful job with the characterization. It's awesome how you delve into the mindset of the characters, and it probably would have been at the time, and keep it constant. There aren't many fan fiction authors that can do that, and not be boring (which you aren't). You also have a very nice tendency to lighten the mood with just a sentence or a phrase, making the scene all that more endearing.

So, now I shall leave you to go read the sequel, you devious writer you.
~THk

That was so sweet and lovely and cute. The relationship between Harry and Sirius was so well written. The idea of the Promise was brilliant. The was you wrote the emotions were amazing. I loved it :)

I simply love this story! <3

It's one of the best-written stories of Sirius taking Harry from the Dursleys I have ever read... actually, I think it is by far the best! It had me sitting at the edge of my seat the entire time and I just couldn't stop reading!

Keep up the good work! I loved it!

Interesting end to the chapter... Assuming that the bright light was from Sirius, wouldn't that patronus be enough to prove his innocence... Being that a patronus is supposedly pure.

Oh, I'm certainly gonna praise you!! This was just beautiful. Wonderful and beautiful and such a good ending to this story. The promise he made... beautiful! And aw, there was all there should be. Harry and Sirius reunited, and Remus believing him and they having a (first?) talk, Albus lending his support and lots of cuddling for little Harry. He is so sweet and he deserves a hug and cuddle after all he's been through. As does Sirius!

I enjoyed this story immensely! I read the whole day through, I simply couldn't keep away and, girl, am I glad you will write a sequel! You are a brilliant writer and I wanna say thanks for this fantastic story!

WOW!! Simply wow! I have to gather my breath here. What a chapter! First I cried when Sirius was walking to his execution and then I was biting my lip till it almost bled. You managed to build up so much suspense it was nearly killing me, but really, wow! I loved Remus questioning Peter and then simply running when he heard of the execution and then storming the dungeon... Go, Remus! You wrote all that so brilliantly! The time drawing out like bubble gum and the chaos breaking out... and Remus Patronus. So good! And that picture of Sirius and the Dementor's circling and then when I thought everything is alright and I could catch my breath, the Dementor grabbing Harry and... What a furious crescendo!

Now there's only the epilogue left? I still want to know so much more!