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Trudyann B. -formerly weirdIT-
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
XD priceless moment at the end there! Such a brilliant story! Thanks for writing it!
1eclecticreader
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
Well played, I say. You did an exceptional job. I love the juxtaposition. I found the story very enjoyable. I especially appreciated the end. I love it! Thanks.
acacia59601
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
Haha! Wonderful story! I couldn't stop giggling the entire way through, and the ending had me grinning for hours! Well done!
t wrecks
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
cute
Mark C
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
A very interesting parallel to Lois' interview with Superman. Of course, Diana and Clark knew each other before the events that lead up to the interview.

It was funny watching Lois spy on the two of them and over the course of spying, she realized how important Clark is to her. The only thing she has to do now is to tell Clark how she feels.

I don't know if Diana knew but I believe Clark figured out that they were being 'watched'. That's why I think Clark changed his manner of speaking with Diana over the course of the interview.

One of my favourite parts was when Diana asked Clark to fly with her. Lois heard that and thoughts of her first flight with Superman immediately came to her mind and she had to leave. I think that when they left, both Diana and Clark flew under their own power. Unfortunately, Lois wouldn't have known this.

The end was perfect. Lois thought that she was losing Clark to the Princess when she showed up at the Planet to thank him for the article. The real surprise was that she was on a date with Bruce Wayne. Seeing Bruce with Diana was a surprise for Lois but probably not so for Clark especially with the wink that Bruce gave him.

Good job.
Volucris12
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
This is a great story. Interesting idea, and very well written. A lot of room for subtle humour - my favourite kind. ā€œI–I think I hear the timer on the oven.ā€ :D Honestly! Are you going to continue it?
DC fan
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
I love these pairings and the clark/diana/bruce dynamic you're setting up. I hope you add to this story line.
Willa1317
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
aw! i liked it =] warmed my heart.
Kloklo
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
Funny!
Gaeriel Mallory
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
This was such fun! I especially loved the ending, when Bruce walked in. Thanks so much for sharing this!
framework4
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Cute, very cute. I love watching Lois sneaking around and thinking the worst. The way Bruce and Diana set things up to get Clark off the hook with Lois was delightful. The only drawback is the word "Complete" for the status as I'd love to see more of this tale.
Kairan1979
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Excellent! This story deserves an update!
Makokam
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
I'm short on time so I'll just say it was awesome. As is nearly everything you do.
Looking to more.

Makokam out.
Dannie Tomlinson
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
Tee hee. Wickedly funny fic. Lois jealous really amusing to watch, er, read? Both I suppose after the events of "Bride"...

I hate, hate, HATE Smallville's Lana Lang.

Why didn't they kiss?

*Sob* :(
d
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved it! The batman/wonderwoman nugget was gold to me! I also loved the clois! I am craving for more! Continue?
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